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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-01-06 10:15 AM


The Feel Of Loves Kiss

Do you know the touch of loves kiss
Feel her drift over your skin in awed bliss
Lift up your heart in pure innocence
And lose your heads understanding sense
Soft as the murmured caress of words
Felt within not really heard
Touched within you
Felt as real and true

Lift up your arms feel the touch of this
Soft as a lovers dreamed and and hoped for kiss
As you yearn for your loves lightest touch
Wanting to feel him within you so very much
Gentle as the breath from a whisper
Reaching inside to confer
Lifting inside you
Known as real and true

Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



© Copyright 2001 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2001-01-06 10:23 AM


Marsha,
this is sooo lovely,soooo smooth, sooo short.

I love this I really do! It's beautiful
Write on
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



maxtec1
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2 posted 2001-01-06 10:27 AM


Oh yes this is so soft and sweet. I feel the wanting the need. I loved it dear.
Love and light,
Richard

Marsha
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3 posted 2001-01-06 12:06 PM


Kethry love, just to prove to myself I can do it short and sweet.
Thank you so very very much love
                     Slushy
                        
Richard love thank you too very muchly
                    Mushy
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2001-01-06 12:35 PM


Short and sweet maybe but the effects are long lasting I assure you.  It is so wonderful to see you expanding your already talented pen.  Keep growing.  I am enjoying watching the amazing results of it.
Marsha
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5 posted 2001-01-06 07:18 PM


Mark my friend, thank you so very very muchly, this was really short but that was the idea, brevity, as opposed to my longer lines. And I thank you for your encouragement
Take care
           Mushy
              


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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