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To All the Children... |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
The brightest star in the sky has a tiny angel swinging from one point and her smile is the smile that brings out the sun as she laughs and sprinkles dream dust. The moon guides her thru the night creating no boundaries, she is free swinging from star tip to star tip she watches down upon you she hears your whispered prayers and she loves you more than even I for she is me, without mortal strings. This tiny angel sparkles look there, far up in the sky sitting upon the brightest star she's smiling down upon you as she will always smile down upon you, even when I am no longer here. Blessed is the woman who gives life from her body. Joann Renee' Muszynski 11/21/00 With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe [This message has been edited by dragonpoe (edited 11-21-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was AWESOME! I love the picture, the sentiments and all of it!! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dragonpoe- oh my...i just love this so much.  it's so beautifully tender and filled with love. enjoyed it much. -vicky |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"and she loves you more than even I for she is me, without mortal strings." Beautiful poem. Very delicate and lovely picture you've created here. Enjoyed much. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
~*Irie claps wildly*~ Most excellent piece of work here dragonpoe! This is going into my library.... This would also make an excellent Mothers Day card!  So very well done... I love it ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oops...finger happy... Sorry!  |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Thank you all, for your kind words. This poem came on a whim yesterday as I was watching my sons play. I did not know what would become of the poem, I just wrote until it was done. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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krysalis Junior Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 22 |
This was warm and wonderful! It painted vivid pictures in the mind! The entire second stanza is my favorite! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
giving this a well-deserved bump  you never cease to impress me, dragonpoe... Poeminister's favourite lines were mine too...my eyes lit up when i read those two lines... [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DragonPoe~ I think your mommy's heart is showing so beautifully here. This is one of the prettiest pieces I've seen on this day. A keeper for sure. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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