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When I'm Gone
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When I'm Gone |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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When I'm Gone When I never write again you shall not even know I'm gone not for long no, and I am not wrong you'll not know when I'm gone when I never write again can't imagine the where or when but if it should happen then won't be for long no, and I am never wrong for I have a beautiful dream you see of writing in calligraphy for a scribe of God I'll be no, and I am not wrong you'll not know when I'm gone for in your dreams I'll come and softly muse you with a hum and lead your dreams to sway away and guide you in your dream today you'll not know when I'm gone and if for a moment you seem alone seek the Sun and you shall see a brilliant little reminder of me strong enough to melt the stone no, and I am not wrong… you'll not know when I am gone 01.05.01 |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
wanna bet.......? |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer, you betting against a sure thing...? There will ALWAYS be light in our lifetimes... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I'm tossing my chips in the pot with Balladeer on this one - 'and if for a moment you seem alone seek the Sun and you shall see a brilliant little reminder of me' We would remember, yes ... but we'd know for sure ! But, you ain't going nowhere with out us calling out the posse ... so don't EVEN go there ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, Ok...sheesh! And here I thought...this was OK...whew! 'Deer on one side...Marge on the other... well, then again...seems like time for a party! |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
what a lovely, delicate piece! Enjoyed it much. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Not as long as you leave us a pre-written lifetime volume of Sunshiny works to satisfy our insatiable passionate reading needs...  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Can't imagine you gone... your poetry writing is a joy to read. This one is another example of your special talent for words. Deb |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes Ma'am, Nan...{~,^} and Deb, thank you! I can't even begin to tell you the "why" of this inspiration... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well, I agree with the Big B. And I for one would know because I already miss you from poem to poem... jwesley |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahhh, James...wow...it's too early to make an old lady cry!... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
wanna bet # 2 ! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mom told me never to gamble...OK guys...all bets off...Sun stays...as long as she can... and as long as y'all keep smiling... and winking {~,^} |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
I'd know, I would For life wouldn't be as it should And if I could I'd fetch you back because you're good I know I would This is lovely and full of light  Stone walls do not a prison make Nor iron bars a cage Minds innocent and quiet take That for a hermitage If I have freedom in my love And in my s |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
for I have a beautiful dream you see of writing in calligraphy for a scribe of God I'll be Karilea, you words are carved on the hearts of the people who read them, they will continue to shine on brightly for a long time to come. There's a feeling of contentment Now that you are here I feel satisfied I belong inside Your velvet heaven" Depeche mode |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, I'd know, you know I would don't you. This is as it always is 'pas excellance' Superb love it really and truly is. Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
as long as Sun shines in the sky her light will shine in the heart in the heart of those she has touched they will know her, and her words she will speak to them, as she always has in words of light, and of love. . . you know you'll never really be gone don't you?? ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
No you will never be gone because I will always have a part of you in my heart. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well my goodnes...now just listen up y'all...I'm not going anywhere...BUT...whenever you need a bit of sun...just look up...I'm t/here... Beverly...you would even take me as I am, I'll bet...thank you... Brian...I will only continue to hope so, my college-bound friend!...learn well...thank you... Marsha...YOU would know!...thank you... Sven, in THAT way, I shall live on...thank you!... Paula, so very sweet, so very you...thank you... |
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