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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-01-01 01:58 PM



When you say "I love you" I feel it
warms my soul like sunburn within
I see love in the depths of your eyes
I hear it within the lullaby of my heart
swimming are we, in an ocean of love
drowning in the reflection of each other
love is written within scrolls of your soul
passion fruit, your lips, sweetens each kiss
your touch gentle as a new born fawn
your love awakens as the sunrise at dawn
flowing slowly over the shores of my body
tender kisses burn with rays of passion
we sunbathe in the sands of sincerity
soothe me with fragrant oils of our love



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



© Copyright 2001 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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1 posted 2001-01-01 02:04 PM


~Mmm,...this is lovely Lady Victoria! Happy 2000th post and New Year! *Peace.
kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2001-01-01 02:20 PM


Congratulations on 2000, and a lovely one it is, too!  Miss seeing you at the Pub.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-01-01 03:27 PM


your love awakens as the sunrise at dawn
flowing slowly over the shores of my body


very beautiful posting..congrats...to you on this 2000th...huggzz

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-01-01 03:31 PM


Congratulations on 2000!

Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-01-01 04:10 PM


Beautiful, passionate, sensual.  Congrats on this being your 2000th!

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


brian madden
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6 posted 2001-01-01 04:17 PM


congrads on the 2000 th post, marked with this beautiful and tender poem.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

RobertB
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7 posted 2001-01-01 05:05 PM


very well done I like much
Marsha
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8 posted 2001-01-01 05:17 PM


Victoria this is wonderful, utterly fabulous

Congratulations on 2000 it is a delightful post to mark it with to.
Take care
               Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-01-01 05:21 PM


A sensual soothe...an enjoyable 2000...you do have a way of soothing...James
Charisma
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10 posted 2001-01-01 05:24 PM


*Congratulations with your 2000th post....and you celebrate it with a lovely gem.
wonderful done....looking forward for another 2000.....

((hugs))
Charisma

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11 posted 2001-01-01 06:16 PM


Beautiful words of love.
Happy 2000th, may there be many more.
Sandra

Irish Rose
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12 posted 2001-01-01 06:23 PM


Victoria,
Congratulations!!  The time goes quickly doesn't it?  Looking forward to many more from you.  

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen



Victoria
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13 posted 2001-01-01 07:37 PM


thank you spitfire ..kcsgrandma..wynter sunshine..poemininster ..brian and robert...appreciate your kind
comments today..HUGS TO ALL..

                     ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Victoria
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14 posted 2001-01-01 10:02 PM


marsha.. james.. charisma.. sandra and kathleen

thank you for peeking in ..lovely hearing from you on this new years day..love you all.. Hugs

               ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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15 posted 2001-01-01 10:35 PM


This is TWO GRAND!!

signed,
Balladeer
a/k/a Stranger on the Shore

Poet deVine
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16 posted 2001-01-01 11:26 PM


Beautiful poem Victoria. And congratulations on number 2000!!!    
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17 posted 2001-01-01 11:30 PM


Victoria~
Just lovely.
Many more we will see from you.
Congratulations.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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maxtec1
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18 posted 2001-01-02 01:03 AM


I loved the feel and love in your poem. very good writing.
Love and light,
Richard

tracie66
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19 posted 2001-01-02 04:50 AM


WOW!!!
Great 2000th post Victoria  
Well done and CONGRATULATIONS
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



ethome
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20 posted 2001-01-02 04:54 AM


Wow! Victoria what a beautiful job of writing picture passages of love...beautiful metaphors of illustration that just steal the heart of the reader...wonderful write for your 2000th and congrats on that for sure!!
Victoria
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21 posted 2001-01-02 08:10 AM


Deery..welcome stanger...and you do look GRAND..now put your clothes back on haa

Poet deVine..thank you so much..i missed #1000..almost missed this one  

Marge..hopefully Marge...thank you for peeking in

Rich..Feel is nice haa..thanks for visiting Rich

ethome..thank you ..and a wonderful reader you are

                  ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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