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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-12-31 02:05 AM


We Are One
~*White Feather*~

Walking into the night
I see the yellowed moon.
I gather close to The Spirits.
They tell what I am to do.

I sit my Vision Quest,
surrounded only by the talk
of the bear, the eagle, the buffalo,
the wolf and the hawk.

As the transformation begins,
I am enraptured by the messages they bring.
I listen and I learn
why I've been given these wings.

I am quiet.  
I do not speak.
I listen to The Spirits
as they explain my quest to me.

It is foretold
that those who listen
will gain the reason
for their mission.

I am learning.
I am yearning.
Eager to tell the stories
as they have been told to me.

I ache with heartbreak
at the sorrow in the telling.
I know that I must learn
so that others who may pass my way
will know the stories I keep.

I must soar with the messages
for others to hear.
It cannot be left undone,
they must fall on all ears.

We are One
We will not be undone
We are One
We are One
We are One






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Startime
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1 posted 2000-12-31 02:12 AM


Oh gosh Marge you took me on the most amazing vision. This is wonderful. I loved it. I felt the spirit flow through each word. Much love and a New Years hug to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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doreen peri
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2 posted 2000-12-31 02:38 AM


you're awesome............
Marsha
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3 posted 2000-12-31 05:46 AM


Margie girl, this is absolutely stunning. Utterly awesome. WOW
The unbroken circle

We Are One!

Take care
               Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



ethome
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4 posted 2000-12-31 06:27 AM


Oh yes! I know what you mean Marge. This is in the blood and it's as important as the sun itself....speak White Feather speak! From the annals of time comes the truth about the precious land......excellent!
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5 posted 2000-12-31 07:43 AM


and HorseWoman will ride
on with the One
into the New Year
with You.

Never doubt
for a moment
that I
treasure every
word

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6 posted 2000-12-31 09:15 AM


this is my fav muse of yours...but I really love your romantic poems too...
Im glad I dont have to choose...can enjoy them all ...
this is awesome Margie-girl.
Happy New Year to all your muses  
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-12-31 11:23 AM


StarTime~
Thank you for validating my purpose in this life -
the sharing of the forefather's visions
with all who will listen.

Doreen~
You know I appreciate your sincerity.
*Hugs*

Marsha~
Unbroken circle - I like that.
Yes, it is so.

ETHome~
You touch me always with your thoughts.
This little spirit thanks you.

Karilea~
Of that - I have no doubt, my spirited friend.

JanetMarie~
And I call her name ~SkyeLara~
She lays the wisdom of the ancients at my feet
so that I may share with others.
Thank you for letting me share with you.
~*White Feather*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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8 posted 2000-12-31 03:33 PM


and as that One
we learn the life
as that One
we learn the light

we are One
and forever shall we always be
lead on. . .

-----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-12-31 06:33 PM


Sven~
Thank you for the thoughts, my gentle friend.

As ONE we shall rise
and in the tellings
shall others rise with us.
And as ONE we will come together
in PEACE.
For that is the way of the Great Spirit.
~*WhiteFeather*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2000-12-31 07:14 PM


You can share your visions with me always Marge ... I will forever listen. Beautiful words my friend!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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11 posted 2000-12-31 08:42 PM




Marge, what I enjoyed most about your poem is that it felt like a journey. Almost looking through... your eyes and "seeing"...

excellent...

-Tier{Robin}

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2001-01-02 02:39 AM


Kit~
I hope to do just that - many times.
Thanks, always, for your lovely replies.

TiersDin~
To know that I took you on The Journey
is a most high compliment.
I thank you.
~*WhiteFeather*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

tracie66
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13 posted 2001-01-02 04:15 AM


Margie~
Thanks for the journey, your vision and spirit are one always.....
Love ya
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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14 posted 2001-01-07 08:03 PM


ONLY"ONE" COULD PEN THESE LINES......
AND DELIGHTFUL THEY ARE...
OUR MANITOU SMILES........
LOVE YOU
        WARRIOR

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15 posted 2001-01-07 08:20 PM


Marge, you are definitely ONE....and you will always be ONE....

of the most wonderful people I will have the opportunity to know  

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16 posted 2001-01-07 09:38 PM


Tracie~
My heartfelt thanks for your read, my friend.

SoaringEagle~
My ~Warrior~ of delight.
You set my spirit soaring.
Peace and love, my friend.

Balladeer~
I am always glad to know you've read me.
Thank you from my heart.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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17 posted 2001-01-07 10:03 PM


Marge~ I wish I could go on a vision quest........this is wonderful.......a true treasure   -SEA
inot2B
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18 posted 2001-01-07 10:23 PM


I envy your vision. You walk amongst the spirits, you are given a quest. Written by one with a large heart.
Mark Bohannan
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19 posted 2001-01-07 11:46 PM


Cheeezzzzzzzz my friend.......where have I been that I missed this one?  I do hear you loud and clear ALWAYS though and you are definitely in touch.  This I know because I have learned some of it from you.  Beautifully done my friend.  I hope this one is going on your site if it is not already there.  I will have to go check and see and it is about time I revisited anyway isn't it?
Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2001-01-08 07:34 AM


SEA~
Thank you for that wonderful reply.
The Visions are open to those who seek.
Be ye a seeker.

INot2B~
The spirits come and gift me with their greats stories.
I open this little heart and they make it larger
by the gifts they bring to share.
Thank you for listening with me.

MarkB~
Musta' been dancing. *wink*
To know that you have opened to the
coming of the spirits is joy to my heart.
Thanks for the reminder to send Mary
this poem for inclusion on the site.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kethry
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21 posted 2001-01-08 07:54 AM


White Feather,
the circle remains unbroken, the stories are waiting to be told, listen and learn and share the wisdom of the circle, for the stories are waiting to be told. Be one with the earth,be one with the great spirit, be one with the wind, the stories are waiting to be told.

Write on
Kethry.


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


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22 posted 2001-01-08 08:25 AM


Excellent poem, Marge! You took me on a spiritual adventure, that's for sure, with your marvelous visions! This was excellent! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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