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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
The softest notes of nightengale, ..as gentle breath of dawn, Float in whisper on night's breeze, ...'mid songs of heaven's spawn. How sweet the music of the heart, ...doth echo truer far, Than madrigals of Muses fair, ...sang from a distant star. Not a harp, nor zephyr heard, ...when dream of scented Rose, But softest note of nightengale, ...as bloom in my heart grows. Cecilia sings to gods on high, ...afloat on evening's mist, Whilst below in Rose's arms, ...I am by heaven kissed. I gaze upon her satin bloom, ...am touched by petal's dear, While Venus sings to gods above, ...tis nightengale I hear. I seek not the stars above, ...nor pine for midnight's moon, 'Tis only Rose that I desire, ...for whom my heart doth swoon. Carry me not, to heaven's far, ...beyond this earthly portal, For in my heart, lives precious bloom, ...my Rose, my love immortal. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 12-30-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ In my next life - I want to be a rose ! Promise you'll write me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm going to pretend that the man I love wrote this Well, a woman can dream can't she  Thanks Mike!< !signature-->"Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-30-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . this is excellent. . . I'm with them!!! --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This belongs in a book of the classics! Awesome. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The softest notes of nightengale, ..as gentle breath of dawn, Float in whisper on night's breeze, ...'mid songs of heaven's spawn. How sweet the music of the heart, ...doth echo truer far, Than madrigals of Muses fair, ...sang from a distant star. ================= wow ... I want to write like this when I grow up  oh that amazing muse of yours ... my my this is so lovely awesome imagery and vocab Mike jm |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Marge...sheesh...you didn't realize you are a rose Marge? we men sure know it... I just happened to find my rose a bit farther north. Thank you for enjoying my poetry. Irish Rose...more important than writing is feeling, and if your man doesn't feel it, then it is his loss. Thank you for the wonderful reply. Sven...I really appreciate the comment, the "I'm with them too" comment gave me slight pause (hehe) glad you liked. Catalina...Thanks ever so much for the extremely gracious reply. May your New Year bring you peace and joy. Janet Marie...you trying to say I'm ancient? hehe... hate to tell you this youngster, but your poetry compares with anyones, including this old fogeys. I always appreciate your wonderful replies. Thank you. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
forgot to put this in my library... LOL at your reply ... Not "ancient" ... a classic ... and as for the youngster/old fogey ... I'd be willing to bet we were born in the same century ... I just act like a 2 year old  thanks for the kind words now lets see if my senile brain will remember to check the box this time later jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Mike, if you don't stop taking my breath away I am going to wind up in the hospital...geesh!! Absolutely beautiful!!Denise |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Absolutely marvelous work! Let the petals fall upon the grace of this poem! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Janet Marie...*smiling* here... my only problem with my senility is forgetting where my cane is sometimes... Denise...hope the snow didn't cause too many problems... you come sailing with me sometime and the winds off the waves will get you your breath back...*smile* Happy New Year my friend. ehtome...what a wonderful reply. Glad you enjoyed my rose poem. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Mike, this was exceptional! What a perfectly wonderful flow, it read like music to my ears ... beautiful words you've woven here, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Always such a pleasure to read one of your poems. Again... sigh... Happy New Year Mike !  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--So exquiste! Your rose keeps blooming more lovely poetry...and I love the garden. Happy New Year, friend Mike!! |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Mike, A work of art! Any woman would be lucky to be the "Rose" in your garden. Best Wishes for the New Year, Elise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is so wonderful to read love poetry that is true and to witness such love each day in your verses. You are both so fortunate to have this gift. I enjoyed this immensely. It is exquisite Liz |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
He does, and thank you for a beautiful poem! Your rose is very blessed!!! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Here I thought you wrote this for Irish [Rose] and I was a tad late in reading, but then again, do we not save the best for the later evening reading? Well, some do... Mike, I have to put this in my library, because it is something to be studied and revered, so that someday, I might write like you... well done, Kind Sir..., verily well done...and beautiful too... |
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