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Kethry
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0 posted 2000-12-29 06:41 PM


Message for LJA. In case you though I'd lost the plot, please note that Kethry "dressed" the wounds and "wore you out". Who's crying now!


The titans all were standing
They all were warriors strong
Some of them remained upstanding
Some were weary of the throng

The victim stood alone and he
Exhausted to the core
Although he'd won small victory
His heart was pricked and sore

He looked around, his former friends
Were bleeding with deep hurt
The victim chose to make amends
And bowed his head unto the dirt

Apologies gave freely up
No more would he declaim
The poets swill which they all sup
Their tastes in write or clothes or fame

Shoulder now to shoulder
The Titans stood as one
To plead the case before the emperor
Before the day was done

With one voice, with one accord
They argued round the victim's fate
Their right to reach the emperor, lord
Before he made the victor's wait

Their argument persuasive
In poetry and in song
The emperor's mind evasive
But still he chose to go along

He raised his hands in wonder
Lifted his thumbs high
"No more this world be torn asunder
By poetic challenge, or Titans cry"



Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


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1 posted 2000-12-29 06:48 PM


...and all the king's horses and all the king's men...couldn't put LongJohn together again!

Well done, Keth...this will go down in the anals of great battles!! Good work!  

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2 posted 2000-12-29 07:11 PM


Kethry~
The whole blipping thing was soooooooo well fought !
LONG LIVE THE TITANS !

Now ... where IS that LongJohn ???

Girlfriend - this whole clashing was SMASHING !
~*Marge*~


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