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2dalimit
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0 posted 2000-12-29 09:13 AM



I LIKE IT HERE (First Paradelle)

I LIKE IT HERE AT PASSIONS
I LIKE IT HERE AT PASSIONS
AND I FOUND MYSELF A HOME
AND I FOUND MYSELF A HOME
MYSELF AND I FOUND IT
A HOME I LIKE, HERE AT PASSIONS

SO, WITH DEAR POETRY FRIENDS
SO, WITH DEAR POETRY FRIENDS
I’M NEVER ALONE
I’M NEVER ALONE
I’M NEVER ALONE
WITH POETRY FRIENDS SO DEAR

A HOME WITH LOVE VERSES, BALLADS, AND POEMS OF MYTH
A HOME WITH LOVE VERSES, BALLADS, AND POEMS OF MYTH
OF MISS MARGE, BALLADEER, AND ELIZABETH
OF MISS MARGE, BALLADEER, AND ELIZABETH
A HOME WITH MISS MARGE, BALLADEER, AND ELIZABETH
OF LOVE VERSES, BALLADS, AND POEMS OF MYTH

I LIKE IT HERE
WITH DEAR POETRY FRIENDS AT PASSIONS AND
A HOME OF LOVE VERSES, BALLADS, AND POEMS OF MYTH
WITH MISS MARGE, BALLADEER, AND ELIZABETH
I FOUND MYSELF A HOME
SO, I’M NEVER ALONE


© Copyright 2000 Melton Culberth - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2000-12-29 09:19 AM


Melton - It appears you've done it!!... I'm not sitting here and counting words to validate, but it sure looks right...

Isn't masochism fun???....

Denise
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2 posted 2000-12-29 09:25 AM


Anyone who attempts one of these deserves a medal!! Very good, Melton!! Come get your medal!!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-12-29 10:20 AM


Well, Melton~
This is just a bang-up job !
I'll chip in on that medal !

Thank you for inclusion in your verse.
If you need Tylenol after doing these paradelle's -
I think there are quite a few of us with them on hand !

Great first paradelle.
~*Marge*~


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ethome
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4 posted 2000-12-29 04:24 PM


Good show Melton ...well done!!  Welcome to Passions looking forward to many many more ...take care    ethome.
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