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IsGona
Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723


0 posted 2000-11-20 04:10 PM


Walkin' Blues

Stars sparkle
Moon  
  Shines
I'd like to sit and
Watch the  
  Sunrise
    
Cool is the wind
Alone with  
  My heart
Dust on my  
Shoes
Brush off my  
Coat
    
Walkin' blues ain't bad
Goin' to  
  Show the  
   Way
Listen to  
My feet
Sing a  
Happy  
  Song
    
The road is long
Time is a  
  Passin'
Goin' to  
Meet the  
  Sun
Feel it's  
  Warmth
    
Up another hill
Down into  
  Another  
   World
See it  
All
Put another  
Hole in my  
  Shoes
    
Ramble on
Find a good  
Woman
Live and die
Drink my  
Fill
    
Well
I gotta  
  Go
Whistle a  
Tune
Write  
Another  
  Scene
    
Gotta find my  
Shoes
Warm coat
Move along
Look for  
Luck
    
There's the sun now
Big and  
  Orange
Pack away my
Books
Time for  
Something  
  Real



"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN"
~Hatebreed~

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Rainydays
Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324

1 posted 2000-11-20 04:19 PM


Nothin' like Walkin' Blues to get ya goin' somewhere.    Love it ~ thanks

Rainydays

Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2000-11-20 04:24 PM


I think Rainydays is onto something here!

*smiles*

great job!

-Tier

IsGona
Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723

3 posted 2000-11-20 07:14 PM


Thank you both for your replies.  They were both kind.
IsGona

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN"
~Hatebreed~

OLIAS
Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
4 posted 2000-11-20 11:58 PM


Ohhh! I like this alot, it ambles down the screen, great sense of movement, excellent!

Regards,
Olias.

IsGona
Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723

5 posted 2000-11-21 10:14 AM


Olias ~ Thank you for your reply.     I'm kinda new to this forum and you are helping me feel welcome.
IsGona

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