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Honest opinion - in response to Balladeer's I'm a flirt.
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Honest opinion - in response to Balladeer's I'm a flirt. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Your honesty is dangerous although you can't be topped. I think I'll talk to Toerag to see, if you can be stopped. You gather all the women in with your charming ways I'll have a word with Wilfred to see if your power, he sways You present as innocent you know this can't go on I must contact LJA He'll stop your flirting song Your honesty's refreshing but dangerous as well I'll be calling Seymour to see if he, the risks can tell Deer you shouldn't tell the girls you're only flirting now I'll discuss this with ethome he'll end your sparkling show Don't you be so open, it makes the women sigh your honesty is dangerous it makes the men-folk cry. I know that Mark supports your cause for he is honest too but don't you know it's dangerous it makes the women blue For they all thought you were the one The best thing that's happened under the sun < !signature--> Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 12-25-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw c'mon picnic partner....let him flirt I was getting quite a kick out of it. He he now you're gonna discipline...don't worry I know he'll stop after he tempts a few thousand willing hearts. What you have to realize is that the trip will be delightful. And I know it'll kick the stuffings out of any soap opera....c'mon baby let the good times roll. He's just gonna tease a little and then move on to the next victim... er..I... I mean person. I think your poem is a lot of fun and I enjoyed commenting on it!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
E-babe I could add a verse for you if you like. It's meant to be TIC (Tongue in cheek) I hope Deer doesn't take it seriously.(oh oh now I'm in trouble, talk about burning your bridges before you cross them. You don't think he'll take it seriously do you * worried frown* perhaps I'd better delete before he sees, but then what would I do with the blank space. Oh Me oh My nothing but troubles  )Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
No way he'll take it seriously! He'll have as much fun with it as I have! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ah, you don't have to delete it, Kethry, we know it's all in fun, Merry Christmas!!!< !signature--> "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-27-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, Oh love, don't tell him that you meant it as a wind up, I wanted to see him quake a little  Ahh the power Besides, don't you think the idea of him on his knees is quite appealing Faboulous piece love utterly delightful. You are as always writing so well and I love this one too. Take care love Slushy Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...ethome was looking for his stanza...quick go back and edit!...Kethry, this is delightful and he shall eat it up don't you agree? So back up to the top of this merry tree! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Huggle Bunny, you mean he'll see through my cleverly painted lecture...Rats! Well at least I have you to flatter me outrageously. Kathleen, I was gonna write the best thing since sliced bread but then I would have had to add he leave's our emotions dead and EVEN I'M not that good at lying! Thanks for the comment. Marsha, Oh yes the power! I can feel the head rush now. (oh no that's the lack of sleep)Considering this wa written at four in the morning, I did well to make it rhyme, don'tya think. Keth  Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Here ya go Sis, an edited version just for you and ethome of course. Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, now My feeling's really hurt.. I'm dangerous because I flirt! I do it so darned obviously I felt sure anyone could see I provided a good time Wooing ladies with my rhyme. I said no things that were not true Just embellished them a bit or two And, though I filled some with delight I didn't get a single bite! And now you say I'm dangerous And try to make a great big fuss As if some broken hearts are strewn All over earth by this buffoon! That's it! I'm done! The days are through That I toy with the likes of you! You won't hear more from this old coot.. And one more thing...hey, Keth! You're cute!! best thing that's happened under the sun? No, Kethry girl, I'm only one.... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Balladeer flirt??????????????????? Why I don't believe it!!! No way!!!! I don't believe that I have ever seen him flirt a bit. I do believe it is just called, passing on a hope for the many lovlies in the forums. I would do it myself but I am a bit too shy. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mark, I know you're shy it's why I included you in the honest section, also Shy and hopeful and a pillar in the community and a sterling character and....  Deer, what a fisherman you are, but if you're fishing for compliments you're gonna need more bait. Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Came back for the repartee knowing folks would stay to par-tay and now all of this hoopla and parlay someone's drinking fermented barley... Keth, you did not let me down... you're my favorite poet's clown you sneak on in and give it a run that's why I'm here checking on the fun Merry Christmas! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-25-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine you know I can't resist when it's for 'Deer, I am God kissed you know I love the repartee after all riposte was once my forte but now the new year approaches fast so this funny one will be my last I have to turn over a new leaf maybe write through myelin sheath parhaps in the new year my write will pose the mysteries of poems and prose and deeper thoughts will I convey well it should last more than a day maybe not, I think a week after all what's tongue in cheek Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Keth....my bait is alive and well, thank you |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
'Deer, you're right you can never have too many worms for a hook. As long as your bait has not abated. Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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