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November Ponderings |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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November Ponderings October shed her colors to the earth Until the coming of the spring’s rebirth A whiteness falls upon the morning green In frosty coat of icy crystalline The floral rainbow blooms of flower bed Have given way to my sweet holly red The umbered shades of copper, gold and plum Are shriveling now to frost upon the mum What then is left to please the watching eye But white of snow and gray of winter sky? The colored wings of winter birds aspread The green of pine and my sweet holly red And what shall happen when the berries fall And snowy mantle lays upon it all? The bluejay blue will come upon the scene And cardinal red will light on holly green The warbler’s yellow wing and sparrow gray Will flutter passed my eye until one day When snow has melted under winter wren The red of robin will appear again The robin redbreast, on its nesting wing Will bring a pastel palette filled with spring Elizabeth Santos |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
OH BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! I applaud. I'm speechless.........Outstanding....What a picture you paint. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
lovely, gorgeous, serenely Elizabeth's pen... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
This is truly painting with words.You've captured the magic of this time of year. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
It's too late to ponder November here. I do miss it so. Wonderful poem. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Elizabeth I love that title November Ponderings...you certainly went on into the verses bringing the meaning of that title out so deeply and beautifully with a certain penchant for the coming season as everything once again goes through it's cycle. Loved the reference to the Robin at the end..I always get such an appreciation for life when I read one of your nature flavoured poems....thanks so much dear lady...ethome |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful ponderings, Elizabeth!! Very lovely! You could almost make me like winter!!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Simply a November to remember. Lovely, dear lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
beautiful, Liz.....seasons always change and colors never stop....neither does your pen  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely, Elizabeth... I like your ponderings very much! *S* |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
absolutely lovely! your images, rhythm, meter, rhyme... all of it... a perfect poem  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all so very much for your kind comments. I appreciate your reading and responding Liz |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I agree with Doreen - can pay you no higher compliment - it is perfect!!!!!!!!! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, Liz, just when I think you have amazed me as much as my soul can hold, you astound me yet again, with the beauty of your poetry. This is absolutely lovely. |
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