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Two Lines of the Heart .........a Poets' Poetic Collaboration
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Two Lines of the Heart .........a Poets' Poetic Collaboration |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Two Lines of the Heart < !signature-->[a Poets' Poetic Collaboration] Come thee closer, and quietly seek thou my love 'neath heaven's choir, with blessings from above as stars to earth in beckoning, "come nearer" your eyes a portal for my soul--my mirror. something that sparks within, a pleasure too good to be sin. a light that doth shine with heavenly bliss shining even brighter with each and every kiss come closer now, bring thy soul within my grasp, breathe deep, listen to the song as my heart sings come near and step into my soul's warm clasp feel the love from which that heart-song springs. thy hallowed touch ignites the splendor within a heart so long suppressed release thy love unto me two hearts beating, for all to see come thee closer; seek quietly sweet love which timing tests! recline with me in sweet refrain, cause me to catch my breath! come and rest in love and peace beside my heart winged angel breathe thy sweetness tear not my soul apart angels play thy heartstrings ... love's melodic symphony heart and soul in harmony ... dancing to the tunes of destiny O 'tis the softness of thy lips i long to taste thence the warmth of thine heart i doth not waste sweet words fly from thy mouth unleashed by thy ardor. heart tingling from thy words doth make restraint harder. and restraint, O, what a tedious word I would that this love so grand be heard! O, hear those bells from distant nell, thou love of mine, for wedding songs are what they sing, blessed by king and queen, those blessed bells go through my head would that I could, but love instead So softly kiss and darkling glance I am ready for blessed romance strings of harp warm this heart beneath the chill playing the tune of tremoring words of "Now I will" fingers dancing 'cross bare skin gliding, swaying, and twisting around for every heart that is made of gold it beats on memories so I'm told... Special thanks to: Serenity, a_little_girl, Sven, jwesley, kcsgrandma, Rex Allen McCoy, SEA, doreen, Marsha, JanetMarie, Victoria, Interloper, Kethry, Mark Bohannan, Cuddlez, and RainbowGirl Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-23-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is beautiful, sunshine! Gee, I wish I could have collaborated with ya!  I'm gonna pretend I'm in there somewhere...so there!  congrats to all of the talented poets and their beautiful words....  [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 12-23-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This was fun, Karilea, and I think it turned out quite pretty! Thank you!!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Congratulations everyone, this was wonderful writing. KUDOS...and big smiles. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
well, it turned out beautiful!! (and i see you took the liberty of editing my minor bit of levity but let me catch my breath!!! lol... you did a GREAT job!!) ok, here's another one... Merry Christmas!!! hehe... i think i've told you that about 5-6 times now... geesh  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Congs wonderful work. *L* |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This did turn out nicely, and it was fun! Hope to see you try it again sometime. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
To your credit - the lines from so many sources sound/read- as though they've come from a single mind/source and what a wonderfully romantic sensual source it is too! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What is it that can be said? "It takes a community to support a poet...and a poet to lift all hearts..." and yes, I do believe we will do another one...anyone can start them...'Deer...why don't YOU start one since you missed this one [I allowed it a couple of days...you just missed it!] But I AM thinking of what I can do to allow doreen her particular quirky muse full access without ANY editing... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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