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Cold Hearted Passion
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Cold Hearted Passion |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sweet words on a screen To warm a lonely heart Night after night they are there Songs are sent Memories exchanged Promises given A reluctant heart convinced Trust me, believe in me I will love you til time ends Let me call I must hear your voice While we love the night away Hours on the phone Meet me please A weekend passionately shared Then Nothing |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*sighing* ~Wynter this too, is upsetting to me...if true, and it is for many, on here and off, it shows the difference in how men and women feel ... huggzz Paula for a write that touches... "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oops! the reluctant heart didn't listen to itself..and then geez just the empty feeling after allowing oneself to be decieved ah heck! hate that... have to regroup and put the guard up even farther....growing hatred for lies.....ah Paula this happens a lot and you have written about it so well!! ethome |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
love is the law wherever it may be found in life on the screen both it is forever part of us we need it short or long love under will |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, Oh love, and I know just how you feel, abandoned and used. This is such a truthful write, and displayed so well. It's the way reality crushes the dream that hurts so much. Still there's nothing to be done about it except learn and move on. All love gives us something and whether that is for eternity or just a short while, that is a gift, so I'll take my gift and go forward. Not much of a comfort I know, but it's at least something to hold onto. My heart is with you. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe you have described the defining moment when one is able to determine if a relationship is a reality or a fantasy...for real or just a hope and a dream.. unfortunately this happens way to often....James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
My heart breaks within the weave of your words Paula...such pain conveyed with two simple words..."then Nothing"....((hugs)) to you dear lady~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
sometimes intentions are misinterpreted or misrepresented. Part of a problem with people today. Things should always be upfront and clear. Might be a fantasy but then again what isn't these days. Well done Paula Rich |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
that's what i am getting with my new math tutor she said she'd call and she hasn't!! now i am gonna fail o woe is me! nice poem I liked it, Paula |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Paula, you know I have been exactly there. So cruel and heartless. Perfectly expressed emotion here. Take care. Sandra |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Wynter...happens all the time...shouldnt but it does...people prey on lonely hearts...taking what they need with no real concern for the person they are using...thank you ethome...yep makes for some big big walls...and lots of mistrust...hard to see the good ones lol...thank you Jeremy...thank you for your poetic reply...and yes love is the law that governs us...but I'm tired of the law...feel like breaking some rules...wanna come along? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AARRRGGGHHHHHHHH lol silly blonde Marsha...Oh I know you live and learn...all things teach you something...I just dont always like the lessons...thanks James...yep way to often...and its so unneccessary...hugs Holly...ah well sweet lady...you live you learn...if you are lucky you get another chance...thanks Rich...its a question of honesty I think...if you are truly honest with someone this kind of thing wouldnt happen...thanks Walt...well I cant help you there...math isnt my best subject...thanks guy Sandra...I know you have...and Im sorry...we seems to mirror each other huh? |
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