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How'd I ever feel
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How'd I ever feel |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
How'd I ever Feel Lancelot {Bilal} © 2000 How'd I ever feel Your feelings towards me How'd I ever feel Your thinking towards me How'd I ever feel If the gap just increases How'd I ever feel Your touch & emotions How'd I ever feel Your lovely sensations How'd I ever feel Your sweet scent in air How'd I ever feel Warmth in your heart How'd I ever feel Your pain & sorrow How'd I ever feel Happiness that you borrow How'd I ever feel If the gap just increases How'd I ever feel Across this wall between us! |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Mmmmmm....I have touched upon that...living it actually... I hope that love will conquer the wall...  I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Nice write and Bilal, I love your name....there's a soul singer( a good one too) by the same name....not sure if you care but I just had to mention that...anyways, take care! Nathan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
BILAL, splendid write my friend... coco |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thanx for responding all of you. i really appreciate your comments. Only if the gap would've decreased! but it didn't! Bilal |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Gee have I ever been here before. Good writing. Love and light, Richard |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thanx for responding Maxtec. I appreciate your comments as they are fully encouraging. Bilal |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It truly does make one wonder once in awhile. All very well written love questions candid with beauty! |
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