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JellyBean Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 24Durham, CA 95938 |
To my sweet, all the things I never said. All the little things, that filled my heart with dread. I was never able to tell you, all those emotions I felt. All the feelings I held inside, those that I had dealt. The longing on those cold nights, to have your arms around me tight. And to see your tender eyes, the ones I love and are my prize. The words I could not form, the words I keep with such regret, still linger in my throat simply unable to form, but I don't fret. I know that somewhere, somewhere deep inside, my heart has met with yours, and they cling together with uttermost pride.  *~*Laurie*~* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Heart to heart is where it is at, but I know what you mean, the words are important too! Lovely poem! Denise |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
You touch on an emotion I think we so often fall into, the fear of saying the words.....to the one we love most. Really nice job with this! ) Welcome! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
JellyBean- yes...sometimes it is difficult to find the words to express the emotions that we feel the most deeply. you've expressed it well.  enjoyed reading. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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