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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Time has nearly eclipsed you, resembling a nova your once brilliant cast now a clouded view. It was not always so, safe within the hunter’s sword the essence of all love was yours alone to bestow. Was it goddess earth, or moon? She took back your every gift laced with hidden greed, forever to run from the scorpion. Still, you flicker, fixed in space when wintry nighttime skies coax clarity to clouds, she is lost in your embrace. © 2000 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 12-20-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ this is such a beautiful poem......I just love........ "Was it goddess earth, or moon? She took back your every gift laced with hidden greed, forever, you run from the scorpion." Makes me want to run outside and look up at the heavenly night sky  -SEA |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ah, the Goddess Saga, writes with cryptic word... where is a cypher machine when you need one... The sky is so alive with mystery. Nice to see your words sweet poet. Park |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, SEA, your kind words are most appreciated! Park, read up on Orion, my friend! Corinne |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
woww Corinne a beautifully penned poem, such tender and wonderful thoughts. "In the shadowplay, acting out your own death, knowing no more As the assassins all grouped in four lines, dancing on the floor" Joy division |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thankyou, Sunshine and Brian! Corinne |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I've said it before - I must say it again - you write with such exquisite economy |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
damn! you're good! 'nuff said...... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wilfred and Doreen, thank you, you are too kind! Corinne |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this muchly. Excellent writing. Poeminister |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Poeminister! Corinne |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Excellent. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Excellent. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Excellent. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is very beautiful, Corinne. Nathan |
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