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The Road To Love.............
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The Road To Love............. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Oh dear oh dear What ever shall I do? I find myself lost And totally in love with you I'm so afraid And don't know which way to go I have no map to guide So how am I to know? Which direction should I follow How do I get to be with you Is there something I should say? Someone give me a clue! Each step I take ~ uncertain The path ~ unclear I'm trying so hard To get to you my dear The road to love is only lit when looking behind because everyone knows, love is blind ~SEA~ * just a little silly  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
But it's true! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, excellant, and delightfully sweet. I love it as you knew I would. Yes but that's because they are all totally wonderful.  Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"Oh, deer..oh, deer" Can this be true, my SEA? "Oh, deer..oh, deer" Is that you calling me?!?! Drive two miles south on Lover's Lane Turn left at Ecstacy Then right a Big Boy Boulevard And you'll be close to me. Now follow aah-aah Avenue To Cassanova Court The road is short but I'm not, I am happy to report. Pass Tittilation Turnpike Hey, SEA! THERE! That;s my house! Now say those 5 words that I love.. "I did not bring my spouse!!!" |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Elizabeth~  Marsha~ you are so nice to me!  Balladeer~ I'm thinking I really need some directions........ perhaps you can guide me......help me along the way...... -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
put one foot in front of the other. . . and watch out for the potholes! great one SEA. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sea, that very last verse is absolutely perfect, and it belongs in a song!! I can almost hear the melody......great reading here, my friend!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA, Wonderful write and very true. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven~ no kidding........they hurt......especially, if ya go too fast!!Sunny1~ thanks, I like the idea of it being like a song! PM~ thanks -SEA |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA . . . Hmmmm, how about some rope!! LOL. Just kidding!!! Well done here. This was cute my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Cute for Balladeer - that's 6 words. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful poem SEA ... I loved the flow in this ... just terrific! And hey! It's so nice to "SEA" you! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
If this is just a "little silly" SEA, let me know in advance when you're ready to be serious so I can prepare....wonderful "little silly"... jwesley |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LW~ Rope?! now I'm wondering.......... what do I do with the rope? Interloper~ Thanks......I don't need him to count....... Kit~ thank you, and thank you JWesley~ awww shucks......make a girl blush.... thank you sweet friend -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just close your eyes and follow the path that your heart leads you on. Wonderful little tour through your mind my friend. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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