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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2000-12-19 07:20 AM


A smile
A knowing look
A whispered word
Passions ember flares

~*~

A kiss
A breath of love
An inviting movement
Burning anticipation

~*~

A touch
A velvet caress
The flame rises
Passions embraced

~*~

A gasp
A seductive whimper
As lust beckons
Souls ablaze

~*~

A sigh
A sated desire
The lingering glow
Divine fulfillment



"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-12-19 07:26 AM


EagleOne~
Oooooohhhhhhhhh, my gawd !
This one is definitely smoldering !

~*Marge*~



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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
2 posted 2000-12-19 08:07 AM


Marge ~ This one was supposed to slip quietly through. Smoldering perhaps, but not too hot.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


ethome
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3 posted 2000-12-19 08:10 AM


Man those are beautiful glowing emders flowing down that page.."Passions embraced"......."souls ablaze."  and then of course..."Divine fulfillment."  great stuff!
Victoria
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4 posted 2000-12-19 08:41 AM


Sounds good to me ha...nice one Eddie

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-12-19 08:56 AM


ahh poet from down under ...your warming up
these cold winter days here...
wonderful romantic verses of desire
like seeing this side of your writing..even if you are blushing  
later-fate and destiny-gator
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
6 posted 2000-12-19 09:08 AM


oh my.....oh my......these are HOT

love it.....mmmm......yes I love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

Startime
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7 posted 2000-12-19 09:31 AM


*sigh**sigh**sigh* very warm and inviting. I loved them and the wonderful way they made me feel. Much love to you from me
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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
8 posted 2000-12-19 03:10 PM


ethome ~ Thankyou so much for stopping bye to add your thoughts, much appreciated!

Victoria ~ You reply has given me a smile  Glad you enjoyed.

Janet ~ Just doing my bit to try and bring some warmth and comfort   Once again I thankyou for your kind comments. I did enjoy doing this and only blushed a little.  

Charisma ~ I'm so glad you like it.  

Startime ~ Warm and inviting is the feeling I was looking for. Wonderful to know I could convey that to you.  


"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


SEA
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with you
9 posted 2000-12-19 03:29 PM





This is sensual to say the least!   -SEA

Lone Wolf
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10 posted 2000-12-19 11:28 PM


EagleOne,

My, my, what a poem you have written!!!  Passionate and full of heat!!  WOOHOO!!  

Nice job, Eagle.  I knew it was in there somewhere.

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Butterflies_dont_cry
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11 posted 2000-12-20 01:08 AM


Amazing what an Aussie can hide under his
Angel Wings   and.........blush?????
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Right     LOL
I'd say you wear the color well my friend...
excellent writing~

Paula Finn
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12 posted 2000-12-20 01:17 AM


HEHEHE now dont you go getting all shy and innocent there guy...after this... well Im not gonna say it hehehe...sizzling here now
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
13 posted 2000-12-20 02:38 PM


Sea ~ That was the feeling   Glad you enjoyed!

Lone Wolf ~ Yes you did, didn't you.   It was just a matter of channeling the feelings. Thankyou!

Buterfly ~ It was one of those moments when the devil inside gained control   . Such a lovely shade though, I think it definately is my colour lol. I thankyou my friend, take care!

Paula ~ Shy, sweet, and innocent, yep! that's me.    < !signature-->

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



[This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 12-20-2000).]

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