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Passions Fire
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Caught you from the corner of my eye a moment ago, saw an angel sitting there, smiling at something I could not see; something that sparked my jealousy, thinking that it might not be for me. Funny how, after all these years, a little thing like a private smile could pinch my heart the way it did, could make it double-beat, could twist my ire, raise a fire within my chest. We grow together with passing years, we temper fires that used to consume our souls with passionate bliss, we learn to live with each others faults, we share a love, warm and good, comfortable, in our wedded space. Yet, after all these years, I caught you from the corner of my eye, a moment ago, and felt the passions fire. w. james beard, jr. © December 2000 [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 12-18-2000).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You had to know I'd LOVE this one!  Fantastic my friend!!  -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
jwesley-Beautiful write. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Loved it, absolutely loved it, just like a real conversation in poetry form! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jimmy, this is wonderful, an absolutely first class write, and yes I love it, I really do. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh yes, your writing is fantastic. I loved this one. *sigh* Passions fire, how appropriate. Much love to you from me. Thank you so much for sharing this one. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/StartimesPoetry.html |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
i really enjoyed this read. great job. Love and light, Richard |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This is simply beautiful and what we all hope true love brings us...lovely write that made me smile. thank you and take care. ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Wow..I LOVE this..simply love it...What wonderful thoughts you penned here.. ~LL~< !signature-->The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-18-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ A wonderful smolder to that fire, I'd say. Beautifully done with a delicacy of delight. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, Love it when you write from your heart. this was a beauty. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
JWesley--You take a moment in time and weave the most wonderful fabric...that is poetry. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks all of you so much for the honor of your replies...I'm humbled. You words reached far beyond my expectations. That's a wonderful Christmas gift! jwesley |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wonderful writing james! just wonderful..can feel the passion in your words! hugs, g "the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'" -unknown |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great piece here, I can totally relate to what you're saying here! Nathan |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
Oh my, how I long to have something as beautiful as this in my life. Perhaps one day soon? Breathtakingly romantic this is! *sigh* So sweet... Merry Christmas to you and yours. Thank you for sharing! --Cassandra |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks much Fallenrain, Nate and Cassandra, and may the season be good to you. jwesley |
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