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. . . Now Winter has come . . .
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. . . Now Winter has come . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Falling leaves of brown drifting aimlessley groundward carefree in their flight Branches denuded opening their arms skyward in suplication Now winter has come harshly demanding coldness no promise of spring. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Interloper--Excellent writing and images. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love the first one.....  beautiful images......alltogether they are wonderful!  -SEA |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
and she plans on being around for sometime, I'm afraid!! (better get those snow boots out), she'll be around protecting her cool breeze until all remnants of summer is passed. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and we welcome her. . . excellent Interloper. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
sleep comes, rustling branch shivers in the frigid night sap stays at the foot life breaths in quiet soul of tree stays hidden now waiting for the warm black, white, gray night comes harboring promises of life's love of life's song Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Poeminister~ Thank you for the kind comment. SEA~ You DO go on kindasorta~ First time to hear from you. Thanks for the read. Sven~ From you, welcome approbation. Sunshine~ Hmmmmmmmmmm. It seems I've seen this somewhere else You are the best. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yeah, but I put it HERE first! You ARE an inspiration! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Yes,winter has come now.It's snowing in Atantla.like it |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine~ Yes ma'am, you did and I am honored more than my poor vocabulary can convey vandana~ My first time to hear from you. Thanks for the read Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
indeed it has!!! but ya know what? i'll bet spring will come..... eventually, anyway.... enjoyed your writing.... it's got a cold bite to it... something i really dig in poetry |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed the imagery my f riend...well said. jwesley |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoy your haiku's, wonderful feeling to them tonight..and it is cold and snowing and I love it for now... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Branches denuded opening their arms skyward in suplication ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Interloper, I just adored the above quote... Well, actually the whole poem... I'm so pleased I didn't miss this read... Thanks for sharing PoetFriend coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Very lovely haiku!!!!!!!!! Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
There is something so beautiful about winter.....and you have captured it here Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Doreen~ Thank you. Quite a complimentary comment and I am honored. jwesley~ Again, thanks my friend nakdthoughts~ Glad to be of service CocoBaci~ You got a thing about nekked trees?  AWC~ Thank you. peppermint35~ Thanks for the kind compliment. And adieu my good friends until after Christmas. MERRY CHRISTMAS to all ... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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