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Passions Gallery--SEA (a day along the shore)
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Passions Gallery--SEA (a day along the shore) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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birds birds birds birds s s the h e sun i n f l y o v e r h e a d t v e e w t e w h a e h w v s e a crash h v s e a crash e w s t a crash h v s e a crash h v s crash t e w t e alongtheshorealongtheshorealongtheshorealongtheshorealongtheshorealongtheshorealong and a perfect day along the sea b e g i n s --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I feel like i'm at the seashore, what a lovely vision and tribute. Nicely done.. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* Sven.....what have you done....create a wonderful SEA wave....love it. glad that I catch this one before I go to bed....way to late for me now. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven, this is so Circe, utterly breathtakingly wonderful. This is soooo awesome, I can't tell you how special this is. Truly exquisite, you are such an artist. Brilliant Sven it's really superb. I love this one Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool..she will love this picture poem so creative ... are you jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i did tell you before, sven, that i admire your eagerness to experiment with new things for your writing... this is one shining example |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven~  thank you so much for this!! Makes me miss the ocean so much........*sigh*......again, thank you!!  -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Poeminister, thank you Charisma, I noticed that you stayed up after this one. . .lol. . . thank you my friend. . . Marsha, thank you. . . always wonderful to see your words. . . JM, thanks. . . I do try. . . kaile, I'm always open to new ideas. . . thanks for noticing. . . SEA, glad that you like my friend. . . your words have always been a breath of "Fresh Air" to us here. . . thank you for your inspiration and for your words. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, May you always have beautiful days "by the sea". Beautiful! Much love, Elise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful portrait of our SEA here Sven. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shoot...thought I was done complimenting you for the day...just to be proven wrong... where DOES your mind go on its night's travels, Sir Sven? To magic, and magic again... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Unique and cool my friend, indeed. jwesley |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Perfect for SEA, our lover of the ocean...well penned and very original format well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great tribute to a sweet poet ....job well done as usual Sven keep up the good work ethome |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Elise, thank you my friend. . . I do hope to have more. . . LW, thanks. . . and thanks for your help too! Sunshine, can I help it if I like hearing you compliment me? And as far as where my mind goes. . . well. . . let's just say I get around. . . james, thank you my friend. . . tracie, thank you!! always wonderful to see you. . . ethome, will keep up the good work as ordered Sir!! Thank you!! ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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