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Somebody Else's Sunrise
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Somebody Else's Sunrise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Somebody Else's Sunrise ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~ Sleeping beauty from the glow of night arises yawning the dawning ~*~ Night sleeping beauty arises from the yawning glow of the dawning ~*~ Yawning beauty of the sleeping night arises from the dawning glow ~*~ From the night beauty arises the sleeping glow of dawning yawning ~*~ Beauty from the night sleeping arises yawning the glow of dawning ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Incredible - almost a paradelle (sp?) I'm very impressed - the only ones I've seen were most unmemorable - this is beautiful |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Amazed with awe! Perfect!!  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
most awesome Marge!!  -SEA |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this is LOVELY! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perfect! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ It's just a little assortment from the sandbox. I keep it to play in when I'm sifting thoughts. Insect~ Why, thank you. SEA~ Glad you like it, gal. Doreen~ Bring your pail and shovel. Let's play in the sandbox ! Lots of fun-filled thoughts for sifting. Thanks, hon. Karilea~ *grins* Come on over and play with Doreen and I. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is incredible, it really is. How do you do it. Love this I really do Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!I am so very amazed. This was fantastic. Much love to you from me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Beautifully done. I love the way you have rearranged each line yet still kept the flow and feel of it. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well it is obvious that your sandbox is filled with diamonds. Wonderful piece my friend and may I join. I have my boots so I won't need a shovel and pail. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ Goodness, gracious ! I'll have to share some of my little sandbox pieces more often. Thank you so much. StarTime~ Well, I'm the one amazed here. I really am ! Thanks for the accolades. LoneWolf~ See, it happened like this ... I just threw some thoughts on the sand - and started tracing and sifting. It just worked out this way. So glad you enjoyed it. MarkB~ LOL ! Now the very thought of those boots in my sandbox has me giggling and asking - Can you dig it ?  *Thanks to you all for being so gosh-darned nice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Marge, What a beautiful read. Poetic perfection! Elise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Marge dear~ A beautiful senryu poem with great imagery! Love ya, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Athena~ I do appreciate your reply so much. Thank you. Melissa~ Little grains of sand Within the sandbox playing Sifting through my mind *You know I am glad to see your name in my sandbox. Love ya' ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
wow...I like the way you play with style. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertB~ Thank you so much for the reply. I've missed you and hope you're back for a long, long stay. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge--This is excellent. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
outstanding.....you are an amazing poet, and I admire your work Marge. but I guess that you allready know that. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
very clever Marge! I love how you arranged and rearranged the words great work! ethome |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I really enjoyed the flow in each of these Marge ... Great writing! The arrangement of the words is superb ... is there nothing you can't do sweet poet???  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetMinister~ Thanks for reading and enjoying. Charisma~ Shucks, it's always nice to know you enjoy what I do. *Hugs* to you. ETHome~ It really was fun and quite easily done. Just playing in the sandbox. Kit~ Wanna play in my sandbox ? This was just so fun ! There's more of them from the same words ... maybe I'll get a chance later to throw them out here too. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--So busy, not enough time to read so much lovely poetry...and I do love this! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Sweetie ... busy is good in the florist business - yes ??? YES ! Thanks for the visit. Happy Holidays, sweet sis. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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