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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-12-16 09:24 AM


I Am What I Am

Sometimes I act like a chesh-ire cat
Spitting stories illegally fat.
Philosophies from out the pines
With peanut butter and jelly lines.

I'm a chesh-ire cat in a bind
And sizing up your lovely mind
Winking in viability.
Undressing gullibility.

Some times I'm seen sometimes I'm not
It really doesn't mean allot.
I'm testing fallibility.
I do have that ability

I'm always winking out of sight
I'm really a misguided knight.
But I am wrong, I'm never that
I'm really just a chesh-ire cat

I see the questions on your face
And this is not the time or place
For I don't care the why or where
As long as you and I can spare.

A laugh, a nod, a loud guffaw
             and
If you stroke me, I'll babble more.


© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2000-12-16 09:37 AM


Pat.. Pat...
Stroke... Stroke...




Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-12-16 10:02 AM


personally for me ...
peanut butter and jelly is a delicacy
as the saying goes..be careful what you wish for
you never know who may come stroking at your door
*winkiewinkie*
later-cheshire-gator  

oh yeah... remember Pop-eye ...
"I ams what I ams and thats alls thats I ams" LOL

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-12-16 10:15 AM


stroke, stroke, pet and pat some more
I come winking and knocking at your door
for you my fat Cheshire cat shall be
you are what you are, which is fun with me

{~,^}


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Irish Rose
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4 posted 2000-12-16 10:34 AM


Where's the looking glass!
Loved this, how original.

"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day,
so I never have to live without you."

Winnie the Pooh



Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-12-16 11:27 AM


Nan,
I'd tiptoe through your common ground
But your common ground is quite profound. *L* Sy

JM,
If peanut butter and jelly be your key
Then have some tea of my potpourri.
It would make you dream of chesh-ire cat
MEOW, MEOW and that would be that.
*L* Sy

Karilea,
Your hand to stroke my pate is kind
But I'm afraid no hair you would find.
*L* Sy

Irish,
And some potpourri tea to you too. *L* Sy

Mike
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6 posted 2000-12-16 11:51 AM


I am what I am,
I'm not what I'm not,
Especially the hair,
That no longer I've got.

Sorry about that...  us follicly deprived need to stick together...

enjoyed the read..

doreen peri
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7 posted 2000-12-16 01:08 PM


i thought i was going to read about popeye!!! hehe

babble on, Sy... consider yourself stroked with these words...

loved your poem!  

Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 2000-12-16 01:13 PM


What a delightful poem!
Brings a teethy smile
You are a creative cat
(I only wish In liked cats)
Liz

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-12-16 02:04 PM


Seymour~
Caught up in your little rhyme -
Ya' got me purring ......
Just can't wait to see
what next your quill is stirring !

A delightfully delicious piece of your mind.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

maxtec1
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10 posted 2000-12-16 02:33 PM


Too cute. it gave me a big smile. great writing.
Love and life,
Richard

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2000-12-16 04:17 PM


Mike,
Enjoyed your comment.

Doreen,
Thank you my dear, glad I could bring a little cheer. *L*

Elizabeth,
But a chesh-ire is not a real cat.
Love Sy

Marge,
Thank you for the delightfully delicious. *L*

Richard,
Glad I could bring a smile to your face.

Cerenity
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12 posted 2000-12-17 11:31 PM


Hi Sy,

You are, yes you are a special guy, this is too cute, smiling and sending BIG STROKES your way.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



CocoBaci
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13 posted 2000-12-17 11:34 PM



Seymour, I ditto the above replies...

Splendid read my friend thank you...

coco

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2000-12-18 11:36 AM


Cerenity,
Thank you for the big strokes.

Coco,
I ditto the above, thanks.

suthern
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15 posted 2000-12-18 12:18 PM


Be careful, dear friend... You know that
Mean ole Long John will kick a cat
And big ole ouchies on your shin
Would wipe away your Cheshire grin.

Loved this one, Seymour! *G*

Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada
16 posted 2000-12-18 12:34 PM


A delightful read.  Enjoyed.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2000-12-18 07:11 PM


Suthern,
You know a Chesh-ire cat can become invisable. Thanks.

Poeminister,
Glad you enjoyed.

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