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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2000-12-14 11:53 PM



Cinnamon Anenome
Virginia Salter

cinnamon anemone
sittin’ on a rock
beside the sea

wavin’ its tentacles
lurin’ in prey
hasn’t much to say

hermit crab
comes strollin’ ‘round
thinkin’ of treasures
he has found

tosses up shrimp
one claw at a time
“Hello, Cin,
ol’ friend o’ mine

here’s a bit
of food for you
let me know
when you get through

though I’m a hermit
I like you, Friend.
You don’t ask questions
‘bout the time I spend

‘n’ since I’m a hermit
it works out well
to drop on by
‘n’ sit a spell

© October 16,  2000

Cinnamon Anemone, 2
Virginia Salter

Cinnamon anemone
has a natural enemy
to decimate his family
eating with great gluttony
is the Tompot Blenny,
Parablennius gattorugine,
wanting his realm quite empty
of any kind anemone.

Now if you had an enemy
that could eat so voraciously
what would be your victory
over such a travesty
of being eaten ravenously
by such an animal entity
as a Tompot Blenny?

© October 17, 2000

© Copyright 2000 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-12-15 03:54 AM


You lost me on all those big words. I'm gonna have to look all them up in an encyclopedia or something. gosh...

Hehe, but anyways, I really got a kick out of both one and two.  Grand gesture

VAS
Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2000-12-15 08:56 AM


Hehe, I think this should be read aloud in a very proper, British tongue.  The bigger words are just the scientfic names of the enemy of the anemone.  Glad you enjoyed, I certainly had fun writing them.  I was trying to make a tongue twister both times but think the 2nd was more successful in that.
Virginia

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3 posted 2000-12-15 10:07 AM


VAS,
    Very interesting. I loved your superb work of vocabulary in this one!
           Elise

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