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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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(Apologys to DP) You Tantalize Mesmerize I idolize Your eyes Your sighs Your cries Can't disguise No matter what the guise No lies There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Mar |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
- No surprise - to find a deeply felt love poem beneath your name! I enjoyed this very much! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* yes, yes, I liked this one. Really interesting use of words. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
very good. I enjoyed. Love and light, Richard |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WY~ delighted eyes.....to read this beauty!!  -SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You poem eyes glowin not snowin just knowin Hi Bill...enjoyed your poem! |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Short, sweet, and simple...Love it! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
all sighs no whys or whynots this rocks Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You neednt apologize for anything...this is lovely |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Thank you all - I stole so many words from 'you have my heart' more words were hers than mine - thanks again to you all |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh geez.... i didn't even SEE this!! this is really well done, Bill! apologies? no way!! i'm honored to have inspired you with one of my poems. i like this a lot... it's simplicity speaks love in volumes! (i wish it was "you have my heart"... it was "you OWN my heart"... OUCH! lol.. maybe one day it will be "you have my heart" and later, i'll write a piece called "you had my heart" and then after that, i could pen a verse entitled, "heart? what heart?", followed up with a little country tune called, "i got a stone cold heart right here in virginny!"  .. hehe... i'm having fun with this...)but anyway, loved it! really! - all you can ever really ask out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry - |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
like this much!!!!! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi, simple yet creative, short yet tells lots...thanx for the read |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Doreen - This will teach me to be more precise - still I loved the wimsey in your response Vandana - Kaile - Thank you so much - I do appreciate your responses |
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