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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
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0 posted 2000-12-12 03:40 PM



Complete Romance
By Richard Maxfield
4-3-2000

As I see you standing
In royal silken robe
Thoughts of love abounding
With in mind they probe

Female grace and beauty
Adoring eyes behold
A story of love like ours
Has yet to ever be told

Heavens stare light shining
Glistens from your hair
You in my arms forever
My sweet lady fair

Soft sensual neck
Golden skins glow
Loves ever inviting
You’re the love I know

Gentle swaying curves
Alluring shadows dance
Loves passions rising
Complete fulfilled romance

Come in to heart
Perfect-ruptured friend
Be my faithful lover
Yet once again

Voices softly speaking
Whisper I love you
In your spell of love
What more can I do

You’re in my soul forever
Love more pure than gold
Ever lasting bond
Mine to have and hold


© Copyright 2000 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
1 posted 2000-12-12 04:37 PM


Oh this just makes a girls heart melt. Such romantic, lovely words you write.

Come in to heart
Perfect-ruptured friend
Be my faithful lover
Yet once again

I liked this part the best.

Lady Lightning
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 422
Kentucky
2 posted 2000-12-12 06:47 PM


Awe Richard...here you are again making me swoon...Gonna have to get someone to catch me
before I hit the ground...OUCH..(too late)..hehe     ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

SEA
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3 posted 2000-12-12 06:50 PM


*SIGH* this is gorgeous! I just love this!   -SEA
Victoria
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4 posted 2000-12-12 06:51 PM


YES YES YES.. HA....dont stop..

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
5 posted 2000-12-12 07:08 PM


LOL YOU ladies are to much fun. Thank you for your comment.
Love and light,
Richard

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