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Passions Gallery--Irie (the last to see)
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Passions Gallery--Irie (the last to see) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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she's the last one to see the sun so she appreciates it more it always reminds her of the last time she saw it on that day reflecting off the water filling her eyes warming her like two protective hands holding her close making her feel safe like those hands that she took into her own on that day when she held them to herself offering love and life the life that she feels now when she looks into the eyes of that one the one who takes her hand into their own holds it close and takes her walking to see the sun she appreciates it more because she's the last one and she's not alone --------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A lovely write poetfriend Sven  Coco |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sir Sven, if you posting such lovely and accurate pictures of passions poets you will leave nothing for us to say except... Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm not familiar with some of the poets you are writing about Sven because maybe I post at different times or some aren't active for a while..but I do love the way you're putting it all down with such kindness and skill.. you have developed the personalities of each one...such a tribute to them...take care.. ethome |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She will softly smile at this lovely tribute! Well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful.......have really enjoyed these! Am rather new here and these have given me a wonderful glimpse of the writers in the group. Thank you! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Eowyn New Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 7Malaysia |
It's very nice... Keep writing =) Eowyn |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
poetfriend Coco, thank you. . . Kethry, surely you agree with me then? Thank you my friend. . . ethome, thank you my friend. . . yes, I have been including some that are my favorites. . . Irie has been around for a while. . . perhaps you should check out some of her work. . . Sunshine, thank you for reading. . . dreamkeeper, thank you, I'm glad that I can introduce you to these wonderful people and poets of Passions. . . Eowyn, thank you, and welcome to Passions. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
sven, this reads as if Irie has been through a rough patch but has now found happiness...am i right? thank you for this piece...i may be here for quite sometime but i still dont recognize all the poets but your Passions Gallery offers this fine opportunity to do so...  |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
~*Irie hangs her head in shame*~ Oh Sweet Sven... I don't know how I missed this post! I'm so embarassed that it's gone by this long until I saw it!  You know, you've hit the nail on the head with this one. You know my life well m'friend! Thank you so much, I am honored. Great big hugs to you....and I'm sorry it took me so long to discover this Gem! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Well .... I'm glad Irie found it ... as I had surely missed it too. Beautifully done - and quite a remarkable tribute to this talented poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
and so I am, glad that Irie found it, so I had the change to read this, lovely tribute sven. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this is another beautiful tribute from a heart that sees all and love all. Wonderful, dear one, simply wonderful. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, You have painted a lovely picture of Irie here. Very nice. Irie . . . Nice getting to know you a little better through Sven. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ WoW!!! This is so very beautiful, a very deserving tribute Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
kaile, Irie is a person all her own. . . and her life continues to be as such. . . thank you my friend. . . Marge, thank you my friend. . . she is indeed quite talented. . . Charisma, thank you for reading my friend. . . Startime, thank you so much. . . LW, it's my pleasure to introduce you to Irie, she's a wonderful person. . . Tracie, thank you my friend. . . you've been missed. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Irie, no need to hang your head my friend. . . I'm glad that you found it. . . your words have indeed been Gems from the first. . . and it's been my honor to know you as a friend. . . my wish is for you to be happy. . .thank you for everything. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
I'm blushing here. Marge...I thank you for such kind words. They mean a lot!  Sven...You've made many comments that have made me smile. quote: Thank you Sven.....Check your mail. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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