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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
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Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-12-10 10:15 PM


A passage in this silent wind
Has left me where my dreams begin
Not in this world so filled with hate
No hope to let rely on fate

Causing me to look this time
For something that I wish to find
A passion for this life again
Not needing to look within

See the love that’s all around
My friends and family I have found
To carry me through times of need
And see all that my kids have seen

That we are all apart of one
As is the light onto the sun
And heart that pounds and shares one beat
And flows through all we see and meet

The passage to this silent wind
That’s left me where my dreams begin
Not knowing where I’m soon to go
Now place my faith in you.


[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 12-10-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-12-10 10:25 PM


You've outdone yourself lovie.

Your writing is most awesome these days...as is your heart. HUGS.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2000-12-10 10:29 PM


BRAVO!!!This was a fantastic read. I loved it. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

3 posted 2000-12-10 10:31 PM



SPIKED, this is great my friend

I loved it every word.......

coco

Victoria
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

4 posted 2000-12-10 10:59 PM


very lovely ...enjoyed reading spiked..

             ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
5 posted 2000-12-10 11:45 PM


i like the journey portrayed here. very beautiful.

"I sound my barbaric yawp over the rooftops of the world."
-matching clothes are extremely overrated-

spiked
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
6 posted 2000-12-11 04:36 PM


Thank you very much Serenity, Startime, Coco, Victoria and Ethan. This time of year usually overloads my thoughts.
Rich

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2005-04-22 08:40 PM


what an ending!
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