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Missy
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 28
USA

0 posted 2000-12-10 08:46 AM



Man of my dreams
by Missy

That wonderful night, under the stars and moon
When you leaned over and kissed me gently
Could it be? My hopes and dreams becoming reality
I didn’t believe that it happened actually

A long pause, I know it scared you
Was this happening
All my dreams finally coming true
Oh if you only knew
All those nights I’d dreamed of you

Ever since I was a little girl
I dreamed of what would be
When I met the man of my dreams
That man was faceless
Until shortly after I knew you

Then every night when life was calm
I thought of how close I wish we could be
And on the nights I was scared or just down
I dreamed of you coming to rescue me

Now my dreams are reality
I think of you day and night
You are the man in my dreams
My one true love - the only man for me
Matter not what the world does
Just know - together forever we will be


© Copyright 2000 Missy - All Rights Reserved
maxtec1
Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
1 posted 2000-12-10 10:01 AM


Gee what a lucky man he is. Great writing. i enjoyed the read.
Love and light,
Richard

Missy
Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 28
USA
2 posted 2000-12-10 01:36 PM


Thanks Richard! I really appreciate your comments. I put this into Critical Analysis at first and the moderator told me to post it somewhere else for comments, cause they don't like to comment on ones that are held so closely to the heart. Thanks agian!

Missy


[This message has been edited by Missy (edited 12-10-2000).]

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