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KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2000-12-09 12:00 PM




On white sand
being tenderly caressed
by the waves
of the sea.

footprints in the sand
barefooted
sensual pleasure
being wet.

feeling something special
happening
between you and I
embraced by the sea

© 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa(All rights reserved)


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Passion,imagination
  and intellect
    running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko
  



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© Copyright 2000 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-12-09 07:27 AM


Very nice Koko...James
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-12-09 08:23 AM


mmmm very nice indeed ...
closed my eyes and I was there ...
lovley images you have penned
well done
take care
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-12-09 09:10 AM


Beautiful....love the picture too.    
KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
4 posted 2000-12-09 04:06 PM


Aloha And thank you to all of you for commenting on this poem.
Happy Holidays to all!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

5 posted 2000-12-10 03:26 AM


Lovely words...

thanks for the read...

K


Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
6 posted 2000-12-10 04:45 AM


Koko
A belated welcome from me. I'm sure you'll enjoy Passions.
I really enjoyed your poem, so I'll have to have a look for more.
Dee

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