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Take My Hand.
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Take My Hand. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Take My Hand. If you're down, take my hand Let the love I show enter your mind As the pain leaves, you will understand That love is me and you, laying in a bed of roses Dancing in the rain toward rainbows Where butterflies turn into angels And the sparkle in your eyes Shines through our hearts and lives ~~Daniel J D~~ Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sounds simply beautiful. Thank you for the sweetness of this poem. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Daniel, this is terrific, it really and truly is. I really like the images in here. Wonderful poem from you really excellant take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Startime, You are so very sweet, thank you. Marsha, I always look forward to your wonderful comments thank you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW! Wish I could write like that  Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Interloper, The writing comes from the feelings in the poet's heart. You have it as well, I am sure. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sweet and tenderly loving. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Such a familiar feeling I have! Thank you for sharing this beautiful thought of your Daniel. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
daniel~ what a lovely gesture this is. very beautiful indeed...left me with lots of warm fuzzies. thank you for posting this...take care. ~amy~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
VAS, Irie, and Amy, Thank you for the warm replies, taking the hand of someone is easy but comforting the person is what constitute love and care. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ Reaching for a hand is easy - holding it gently is another matter ~ You've touched me tenderly ~ Bless you for your compassionate thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I agree with you wholeheartedly, cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"everyone needs a hand to hold onto" John Mellancamp from my own home town of Indiana. "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Daniel, this is such a lovely piece....and how I want to grab that hand, that reached out with love...As I feel down this moment. thank you for writing this wonderful piece. Charisma |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Kathleen, Thank you so much. Have you ever met John? If you know him well please let me know. Reaching out is important, the touch of a hand is love and comfort. Charisma, Hope you are well, thank you for the great reply. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Danile this is simply beautiful |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Jaime, Thank you so very much. Holding someone's hands can make lots of difference. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
Job well done. The love didn't just enter her mind, it took over! |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
Much comfort is encompassed in the hand of friendship. I enjoyed this. *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Cruz, and Rinderella, Thank you both so much, love is very special and means more to us than anything else on earth. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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