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When I am All Alone
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When I am All Alone |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
When I am all alone, Sit and wonder why And what Is store for me? In life, Watch the stars so bright, Wanted so much That I can dream of only, When I am all alone, Think of love that would come to me, And held me tight, When I am all alone I sit and Take my pen To start off to write a song, About love and loneliness, When Iam all alone, Candlelight, The roses are red, I touch the petal And think of the past, Oh, How time go by fast, But the petal slowly faded As the night grew longer, Knew how long the rose would stay? Like a single petal falls Upon me As time went by, When I am all alone, Think of my life, Wonder If love would really come and take my heart away, When Iam all alone, I don't know What to do? Without you, When Iam all alone, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those feelings of loneliness come across vividly, Vandana. This would make a great heartbreaking song! Denise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done vandana..enjoyed very much  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ I think you glow in the soft candlelight of this one. 'Like a single petal falls Upon me' What a pretty thought. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Vandana, You are not alone, just drop me an email. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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