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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Chill Virginia Salter Chill that’s what they say when anger or anxiety try to have their way. A derivative of being cool that not a soul shall know you’d rather be anywhere but standin’ in this horrid mire wonderin’ where to go. Yes standin’ here lips going black as oxygen speeds away threatening to steal your joy and carry you away. Away on fragile wings that break with little blow leavin’ you hanging from the eaves above the raging snow. Snow of life that’s filled with pain and stretches tear to tear making wishes necessity to carry you through fear © November 15, 2000 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
It’s hard to chill, When blood boils, But the coldness of spirit is difficult to defrost, Chilling never has been my problem, An interesting write. Gloom |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
excellent write! very powerful.... take care. ~amy~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I have found myself in this postion trying to look cool and in control. When all I can think of is where to run and hide. Loved the way you put this together. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I enjoyed this, Virginia, the message and the construction! Very good! Denise |
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