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mutington
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0 posted 2000-12-06 03:40 PM


December Depression

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Dark dingy dismal
December days,
dominate my
depression.

Dense despondency
deliberately dictates
a dreary dawn.

December's deceptive
divinity, disguises my
dicontented dreams.

During December's detaining
dusky duration, deep
dysphoria damns me.





mutington/joyce

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."



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1 posted 2000-12-06 03:50 PM


This is very cleverly done!   I liked this, but I really like the dreary weather......just me.... -SEA
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2 posted 2000-12-06 04:42 PM


Mutington~
Very, very nicely done.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 2000-12-06 06:26 PM


Despondence dutifully done ... WELL done!
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4 posted 2000-12-06 08:03 PM


mutington,

Very well thought out writing. Perhaps this is the reason BC is down during December?

BC

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Excellent!!! this is D'vine!!    

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6 posted 2000-12-06 09:36 PM


Dashing descriptions dancing deftly down document!
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