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Sven
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0 posted 2000-12-06 12:19 PM


mushy
Marsha
maintains
magnificent
melodies,
making
many
m
   e
     l
       t

                    musing
                    magical
                    marks
                    masterfully
                    
                    musically
                    mystifying

                                        mending
                                        my
                                        masked
                                                     mute
                                                              murmurs

                     minstrel,
                                   mixing
                                              mirth,
                                                        moral

mining
m
e
m
o
r
i
e
s

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-12-06 12:26 PM


That she is and does and so much more. Wonderful presentation and one that suits her just perfectly.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Paula Finn
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2 posted 2000-12-06 12:58 PM


This is a lovely gift to one of the most loving ladies in Passions...her comments and replies always lift me up...thank you
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3 posted 2000-12-06 03:16 PM


Sven~   Our Marsha is the sweetheart of Passions.......wonderful poem for her......loved the way you presented this   -SEA
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-12-06 03:21 PM


Oh, this is just wonderful Sven. She does indeed insight all of these thoughts ... a marvelous tribute to this special woman! You Marsha, are a lovely and warm friend, with such a caring and compassionate heart. Hugs to you! Great writing and presentation Sven!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2000-12-06 03:36 PM


warm applaud for these wonderful written words.....lovely tribute for our Marsha, and she is our only mushy Marsha.....
and hey I like the form too.....

(hugs))
Charisma

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6 posted 2000-12-06 10:21 PM


Sven,

Nice portrait of Marsha.  Wow, never knew there were so many M - words!!  LOL.  Nice job.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Sven
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7 posted 2000-12-06 11:07 PM


Thank you all my friends. . . I had a lot of fun with this one. . . and LW, you wouldn't believe how MANY "M" words there really are!!!    

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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8 posted 2000-12-06 11:43 PM


marvelous..ha..

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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9 posted 2000-12-07 09:24 AM


Sven, WHO ME? Are you all sure you're talking about the right Mushy here, because I don't reconise your Marsha at all.
But even if it's not to me I'll keep it, because it's a wonderful poem, absolutely excellant. And you've presented it beautifully. And L W I know some that suit me a lot better.
Madcap, muddled, mystified, manic, messy, middling, and malapert. Mmmmm
But thank you very muchly for this tribute to whoever this is for really.
Take care
                 Mushy
                    
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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10 posted 2000-12-07 12:26 PM


Excellent.

I would say that this is Marsha, from what I've read of her work.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


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11 posted 2000-12-07 12:56 PM


melliflous meaningful max
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12 posted 2000-12-07 01:04 PM


masterfully magnificent  
you have captured Marsha's grace well ...
and presented it in a creative way.
jm

I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you

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13 posted 2000-12-07 02:19 PM


Sven I think I have one to add that you missed...simply marvelous...James
Sven
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14 posted 2000-12-08 12:43 PM


Thank you all again my friends. . .  

And Marsha?  Yes, this is you. . . you are indeed all of these things, and so much more. . . thank you my friend for being here and sharing your wonderful words of love with all of us. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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15 posted 2000-12-08 01:36 PM


Wheee!  No kidding, this little gem came in and immediately entered every one's hearts...Sven...how do you do it!?  Oh, I know...Marsha was your Muse!

Well done...


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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16 posted 2000-12-08 03:37 PM


Mark, Paula, Circe, Kit, Charisma, Lone Wolf, Sven, Victoria, Passions Voice, Janet Marie, James and Kari, I'm totally overwhelmed. I'm speachless, I truly am. (And Kari will tell you that hardly ever happens!) I thank you each and everyone for saying such nice things about me, I'm still not convinced there's not another Marsha knocking about though. Because I do nothing special at all. Truly I don't. And know that I love you all, you are all very special to me.
           love
                     Mushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Sven
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17 posted 2000-12-10 10:15 PM


Sunshine, thank you. . .  

and yes Marsha, this is you. . . there's no one else with your name knocking about. . .  . . . who else would bring a smile to our faces like you??

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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