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The Enchanters of Rhyme (Challenge-LadyCat)
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The Enchanters of Rhyme (Challenge-LadyCat) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
 Beneath the breeze of moonlight skies Etched in a world of endearing rhymes Scrolled upon the page of mystery blue Expressed by the one hidden from view... His rememberances and love of life Touches our hearts and souls each night Twinkling of emotions spun into delicate weave A beat of a heart passionately speaks Revealing truths pure and kind Bridging us to a place of dreams sublime... There beyond skies of sapphire jewel Midst petals of white and breeze of cool We sway in dimension of endless time Winged faieries soaring in shadows of his flight... Passions Poetmen... The Enchanters of Rhyme  coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Coco- this is really beautiful... you've done our Passions men proud.. i love it!! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Thank you so much for a wonderful piece. I think that the dear men of Passion are going to blush after they read this. This was just a moving piece. I guess that I better get cracking with my piece about these men, but only if I could find the words to say. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Beneath the breeze of moonlight skies Etched in a world of endearing rhymes Scrolled upon the page of mystery blue Expressed by the one hidden from view... ================== There beyond skies of sapphire jewel Midst petals of white and breeze of cool We sway in dimension of endless time Winged faieries soaring in shadows of his flight... =================== this is SOOO cool and SOOO pretty Coco your imagery is gorgeous... this is a excellent and wonderful tribute to the poets whose words hold us as we hold them dear. very well done ... and a keeper for my library  jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*applauding!!! This is wonderful!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully written Coco..i am sure they will love it..enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
VL->I'm so happy you liked the rhyme and tickled too that you took a peak... LC->I must thank you for planting the seed of thought the challenge you presented was a pleasure to do and I'm smiling that you like this too... JM->I wish you knew my dear lady friend how much I blush when you reply and just know that you touch my heart with your kindness Thank You... PDV->My goodness I'm thrilled you enjoyed this too and Thank You PoetLady for taking a moment to peak in... Victoria->Thank you sweetie for the kind reply you're always there squeezing in a read in between the writing of your 'enchanting' poetry Hugs2Uall Coco |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is wonderful Coco suits our poetmen perfectly.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW! We do that? Thanks ever so much. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wonderful tribute to the fantastic men here -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Coco--This is lovely, i like the picture too. Nicely done.. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening CocoBaci, It seems that I have been away just a little too long. I need to be here, reading works such as this beautiful writing you have done. Very nice CocoBaci, and well done. BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ You are utterly amazing, you know that right ? Not only do you find the time to reply, search in the night through the back pages, but you write delicious poetry ! This is quite the read. You write so softly and it's a pleasure to read you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey!! CB just great vision you are writing here! I really enjoyed it so much!! Write on! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Coco these are very soft and gentle words..James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PAULA->It's so nice to see you stop by and hugs2u for letting me know ya did gurlie INTERLOPER-> You sweetie you SEA->And let me tell you dear poetlady the poetic words that you and our friends share on screen allow me to dream and wake in morn with smiles that gleam POE->ThankU so much for your compliment BILL->I do miss reading your poetry so please when you have a spare moment spin us a weave like you do so well and thanks Poetfriend for your most kind reply MARGE->You are a treasured jewel in my locket that gives me so much delight whenever I read your poetry and/or exchange of replies. Sweetie, your embrace is truly pure and kind and for that Hugs2U 2x2 ETHOME->Nice to see ya my friend and a double treat of sweet to read your reply2me JAMES->I gotta tell ya the inspiration must take the credit for this rhyme and I want you to know that your poetry as well as our friends here inspire's me in many forms... Merci PoetFriend for your kind reply [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
PoetFriend Coco, along with the other men of Passions, we are indeed honored to be your inspiration. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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