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A Little Piece of Love
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A Little Piece of Love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I feel myself hold on to that little piece of love the one that filled my heart and now has been told to depart.. I cling to it, a static charge. Won't let go, even when removed It's cold. My nightie sticks to the covers, My hair stand up to meet the brush, and tears still fall down in a rush. Delusional? maybe. Madness? perhaps, but a little piece of love from your heart to mine is all I have to hold at night and yes, I do still hold it tight. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a sad one..you are too pretty to have your hair standing on end sandra..but im sure you are still pretty anyway whether it stands on end or not  ..Hugs..~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Those little pieces always hold on the tightest don't they...this is filled with longing and pain and causes my heart to shed a tear for the hurt...you wove all the emotion in you heart into this and it came through with an excellent flow~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
simply said, cat, but it packs an emotional punch....well done  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
----------------------------------------- I cling to it, a static charge. Won't let go, even when removed It's cold. ----------------------------------------- This verse speaks to my heart dear PoetLady... A very touching write... hugs2U coco |
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