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Embrace of Trust
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Embrace of Trust |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Embrace Of Trust… Draw for me the love you have inside. Paint the colors you feel when our eyes meet, when I touch you, when you kiss me… Color your world, your heart, your soul with my love, my desire, my passion… Sketch our bodies intertwined in an embrace of trust… Knowing each own’s heart is in the peaceful serenity of the other’s soul… Annie Lehberg achildsheart 6-29-00 Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Knowing each own’s heart is in the peaceful serenity of the other’s soul… ================================= BRAVO! Well done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Whisper, A lovely write...very beautiful... Poeminister |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a lovely write indeed...enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautifully romantic. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 As delicate as the wing of a butterfly..this is beautiful~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
-------------------------------------------- Sketch our bodies intertwined in an embrace of trust… Knowing each own’s heart is in the peaceful serenity of the other’s soul -------------------------------------------- Oh how this poem is such a treasure of romance delicately weaved... Great write PoetFriend coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Loved this......So romantic... The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
WC~ this floated as though on a gentle breeze of love. lovely images you have penned here...your heart exposed and it is wonderful. take care. ~amy~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now how sweet are those last lines. Just lovely my friend. Really got into this one. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is beautiful! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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