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lisad
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since 2000-12-05
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0 posted 2000-12-05 01:59 PM


When Love Passes You By


Have you ever found that special person in your life, that seems to make everything right?
You know that he will always be in your heart,
Even though through the years you will end up miles apart.

The love that you have always looked for, and at a second glance it is there no more.

You spend the rest of your life wondering what might have been,
And all at once, those feelings are with you again.

As you grow older in your present life,
in quiet times you feel the strife,
Of wondering what happened to your younger days,
when at that person you would lovingly gaze.

Thought the years will ease the pain,
you will never find that love again.

lisad

© Copyright 2000 lisad - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-12-05 02:02 PM


What a wonderful entrance into Passions...Welcome!  Seems to me you know the answer to the question of a bygone love...

now, check your e-mail for a special message!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-12-05 02:05 PM


lovely poetic ponderings ...
Welcome to Passions ...
how great to have you join us...
poetry definately runs in the family ...
I look forward to more of your work.
take care
JM

I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2000-12-05 02:16 PM


Welcome to our world...great first write
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2000-12-05 02:30 PM


Welcome, and keep up the good work. I lookf forward to your future postings  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


SEA
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with you
5 posted 2000-12-05 02:35 PM


WELCOME!   This is really wonderful and I look forward to more from you   -SEA
Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
6 posted 2000-12-05 04:25 PM


very well done, welcome to passions.

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


vandana
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7 posted 2000-12-05 06:20 PM


Enjoy the read!!!!!!!!! Welcome to passions!!!!!!!
snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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KS
8 posted 2000-12-05 06:44 PM


'Have you ever found that special person in your life, that seems to make everything right?
You know that he will always be in your heart'

Great write, lisad!  Welcome to Passions!

sp  


'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me...

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
9 posted 2000-12-05 07:18 PM


Well it is about time my dear sweet L'il sister....yes folks, another one .  This is beautiful Lisa as I told you before and I am so glad that you decided to post it.  You know I love it and I love you too.  Hugs baby.  Now, quit pickin on me before YOU get hurt.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
10 posted 2000-12-05 07:51 PM


Questions asked, and yet answers seem so dim...

I really like this, I think about it all the time, if there will ever be someone to replace that one....

Great read

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost


Lady Lightning
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 422
Kentucky
11 posted 2000-12-05 09:47 PM


Beautiful, LIS...Just as u are....

                       ~LL~

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
12 posted 2000-12-05 09:59 PM


Hi and welcome to Passions!
Many can relate to love passing us by. Very tender write from you.
Deb

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
13 posted 2000-12-05 11:37 PM




Welcome to Passions Lisa! What an excellent
entrance...can't wait to read more from your
pen it is sure to be a pleasure! You've
penned from the heart in this piece and it
shows~

lisad
Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 22

14 posted 2000-12-06 12:48 PM


Sunshine, thank you for such a warm welcome..  I was kind of afraid to post, but I am so very happy that I did..  Once again, thank you..

Janet Marie,  thank you for the warm welcome as well,  I am looking forward to posting more in the future..

Paula Finn, Interloper,  thank you for the welcome..

Sea, thank you for the welcome, I am glad you enjoyed it.



CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

15 posted 2000-12-06 12:52 PM



Lisa my dear, you must be in my headspace this eve...

Firstly I must compliment you on this endearing weave of poetic expression that touches my heart in ways I cannot explain as I am sure many of our PoetFriends would agree...

Secondly, my hand of welcome extends to you and I hope to read many many more from you...

coco

lisad
Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 22

16 posted 2000-12-06 01:01 AM


Der Keit, Vandana thank you for the warm welcome.  

Snowpants, thank you so very much for the welcome, I am glad that you enjoyed it.

Mark, my wonderful brother, thank you for giving me the courage to post.  I never knew it was so easy to share my feelings...  Love you!!

Martini,  Thank you for the welcome.  It seems as though you know exactly what I am  talking about..

Lady Lightning,  my dearest friend,  thank you for reading my first post.  You don't know how much it means to me..

Blooming Rose,  thank you so much for the welcome.  

Butterfly, thank you vry much for the warm welcome.  I am glad that you enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it...

Once again, thank you all so much for the warm welcome..  Take care!!

lisad
Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 22

17 posted 2000-12-06 01:05 AM


Coco,  thank you so much for your kind words, and the warm welcome to the forum..  I am so glad that you enjoyed reading my first post, as I am looking forward to writing many more

lisa

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
18 posted 2000-12-06 02:29 AM



Lisa-
   welcome to our little 'family of friends'
   what a beautiful and heartfelt piece
   you've shared for your entrance..
   i look forward to reading lots more.

   ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



lisad
Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 22

19 posted 2000-12-06 02:57 AM


Thank you Vicky for the warm welcome.. I am truly glad that you enjoyed it...  
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