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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Modesty After the sun sets with her wanton spirit comes tranquility the modest moon with silver rays of fairness speaks bright wisdom She sees the stars while they can't see her past their own light Her soft presence is soothing, pure and pleasant casting rays of peace [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Gosh this is pretty. And tranquility is the word.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
She sees the stars while they can't see her past their own light ======================== Well put. Well done. Thanks Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
this is really really beautiful. love the comparison of her light to the stars. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey minister that's real real pretty stuff you're writing there...wonderful!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
sounds wonderful.....flowing pretty. love it. Charisma |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge--thanks for your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed. Interloper--thanks for stopping by to read. A Whisper's Caress--Hello Thank you ethome--thanks for the wonderful... Charisma--Glad you liked. take care, Poeminister < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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