navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #11 » The Dream of Three
Open Poetry #11
Post A Reply Post New Topic The Dream of Three Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2000-12-04 03:15 PM


The Dream Of Three
Karen Torbiak
2000

Together, side by side, they ride,
the center taken by the He who
leads the way with strength and
honesty as He boldly move forward
on the Path to freedoms light

His horse is chestnut in color, with
mane and tail of deepest black,
many hands tall to seat the Man
who sits firm and straight in
His resolve to open paths to
the need of all who are drawn
to the open doors He offers

He is dressed in bright blue
for the truth and justice He
upholds with silver threads
woven to reflect the brilliance
of His mission here within
a space where time and distance
do not prevent the spread of knowledge

The sword at His side is of
strongest steel forged in His heart
where destiny has has gifted Him
with talent and desire to fight
the fight of freedom for all
hearts that are weakened from
the pains this earth has given

Upon His right is She who sits upon
a horse of midnight black who prances
with the same glee his mistress has
and is bridled in turquoise and gold
to match the the flowing gown of turquoise
with golden sash to also show
Her mission is reflected by the
lead of the Man who rides tall at Her side

Her hair is auburn and is whipped around
her face as She giggles with delight
to be out riding upon the beach and
breathing the tangy salty air of
the ocean with these two who are
most dear to Her in life and who
share their heart with Her

Her eyes dance with joy and love
for these two and for the joint
mission they share that is reflected
by Her weapon which is a bow
with which She shoots arrows of love
into all who cross Her path that
they may feel the strength of love
embrace them and sustain them as
they come into the Path of Freedom offered

Their horses step in perfect time
with determination they move forward,
carring those who destinies have
given them a path to tread as they
ride upon the back of majestic
steeds whose muscle ripple as they
forge ahead upon the shifting sands
of life but staying steady and firm
in their resolve as two now become three

On His left is She whose strength
and love is reflected in the
red flowing dress She wears
with golden sash for the purity
of Her mission to fight at the
side of this Man who rides fearless

Her horse is white like no other
with bridle of red and gold
where the sun reflects with brilliant
light from Her steed who carries Her
with pride across the sands of this
beach of time and incredible beauty

Her long flowing dark hair is lifted
by the breeze as they ride along
blowing out behind Her like a mane
while freeing the beauty of Her
features of flashing eyes that
show Her passion for life and desire
to defend all who come withing Her
Path and partake of Her great,
unselfish strength, granted to all

At Her side hangs Her sword of
gold forged with Her words that carry
messages of great acceptance and
understanding of the human mind
deep into our souls where we are
all strengthened by the lessons
that She gives with heartfelt writing

TOGETHER as friends they ride the sands
upon steeds of strength and if you look
carefully as you tread the Path of life
you will see these three who together are
one in purpose and love for all who have
need of them to offer a home of safety
and love like no other for they ride as
one but separate along the beach of time
with swords held high and voices joined
in ONE FOR ALL AND ALL FOR ONE!

THE DREAM OF THREE is love and freedom
to live, understand and love in life
as we all share our hearts and souls
together with words from our heart and
feelings from our souls that all may
feel that this Path will be a place
they can come and know they will be
defended by Three whose hearts are one


Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


© Copyright 2000 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
1 posted 2000-12-04 03:25 PM


Yet another BEAUTIFUL tale from your magical pen..........


"Her hair is auburn and is whipped around
her face as She giggles with delight
to be out riding upon the beach and
breathing the tangy salty air of
the ocean with these two who are
most dear to Her in life and who
share their heart with Her"

Liked this part best........ -SEA

Interloper
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
2 posted 2000-12-04 04:35 PM


She on either side of He ...
I dare not *sigh*, it might be taken the wrong way  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-12-04 04:47 PM


Another wonderful fantasy tale spun from your magical pen wand Karen.... marvelous images once again...great read!!   ethome
Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-12-04 06:43 PM


wow. . . just amazing Startime. . . simply amazing. . .

A tale well woven my friend. . .

---------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Wishmaster
Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 24
Luton, Bedfordshire, England
5 posted 2000-12-04 08:17 PM


This is wonderful Karen, I really feel this poem (almost too insignificant a word to descibe this). I am silently whispering in awe.

Wishmaster.

~ You cannot be what you want to be if you do not know who you are ~



Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2000-12-04 08:42 PM


startime,

This is awesome writing my friend.  Your imagery is breathtaking.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #11 » The Dream of Three

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary