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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-12-03 07:36 PM


sing to her in the shadows of her mind
dance in moonlight of his smile
sweet taste of his kiss across her lips
the scent of perfume upon his sheets
diary of the night has melted down the shaft
the shaft of a candle to the base below
the scent of lavender is in the mirror of love
reflecting upon the pages of the night
Robert Mondavi alone with his glass
ruby lipstick upon his cheek lingers
a lonesome morning for Robert Mondavi
his icy stare welcomes the eyes of dawn
she and her love and Robert Mondavi
in the menage a trois of the morn


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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-12-03 07:57 PM


Again, Victoria, beautiful work.
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2 posted 2000-12-03 08:36 PM



A sweet poem and an enjoyable read Victoria...

Thank you once again for sharing...

coco


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3 posted 2000-12-03 08:41 PM


Victoria,
Very romantic...lovley write...

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
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4 posted 2000-12-03 09:39 PM


Elizabeth..thank you so much..so glad you enjoyed..  

Coco..I am pleased you liked..thank you for visiting tonight  

poeminister..thank you very much..happy you enjoyed..appreciate your kind comments  

                ~Victoria~
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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  



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