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Serenade for Eternity
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Serenade for Eternity |
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Wishmaster Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 24Luton, Bedfordshire, England |
And to you, my dear, I raise my glass And toast the union of our souls That bring together immortal joy Of lovers embraced in a cosmic dance And, - Oh yes, - we have danced before I remember you from times long gone I seek your aura everytime I'm here I can feel the Quickening when you are near You do not know me, although you will Your essence is present as I can feel Your love that carries across the years We are soul-mates, there are no tears We are linked through the Ether Umbilical to each other Time is our Father And Love - our Mother That brings us back time and again To relive our lives and forget all pain That wrenches us when we are due To return to the Everlasting Blue It is so fine to find another That is waiting for me, a familiar lover I can reach for her and know I'll find Welcoming arms and an open mind That knows we are playing the same old tune That has joined with me as we raced the moon Around the world, Oh, it was fun You are my truly, Only One < !signature--> ~ You cannot be what you want to be if you do not know who you are ~ [This message has been edited by Wishmaster (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"We are linked through the Ether Umbilical to each other Time is our Father And Love - our Mother" What a beautiful serenade to eternal love... I enjoyed this much. Excellent writing. Poeminister |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You employ an unusual style in this poem...and it likes me... 'And, - Oh yes, - we have danced before I remember you from times long gone I seek your aura everytime I'm here I can feel the Quickening when you are near' I like the rhythm here...welcome to passions...and thanks for the read...  K[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wishmaster, I welcomed you earlier...and now I can only thank you for a most wondrous piece that shall grace my library, as it speaks to me, as I am sure it will speak to many others... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wishmaster, it is now my turn to welcome you...and I do wholeheartedly....this is an excellent piece of writing |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh yes, I love the romance in this wonderful poem. It is about soul mates and therefore has won my attentiong. Wonderful job Chris. I love it. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Serenade for eternity, soulmates.....sweet words in the ether....oh how I knew this feeling of love so well..... you found the right words to capture this love....and I really love it. Charisma |
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Wishmaster Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 24Luton, Bedfordshire, England |
Thank you very much for all your wonderful comments, it means much to an unworthy poet such as I. Let sweet sincerity always herald the arrival of peace in one's life. Wishmaster. ~ You cannot be what you want to be if you do not know who you are ~ |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
*** Ohhh Wishmaster..will you stand beneath my balcony and whisper these sweet words to me..as I gaze at the stars ..romantically? *wink ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ mutington/joyce "I can live by myself, but not within myself." |
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Wishmaster Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 24Luton, Bedfordshire, England |
Should Romeo forsake his task, call on me to serenade you, and underneath your window I'll sing sweet echoes of love, that will set your soul aflame. Thanks Joyce. ~ You cannot be what you want to be if you do not know who you are ~ |
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