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Agony of Autumn's Greet
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Agony of Autumn's Greet |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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It is the time to gather seed, as winds blow brisk, from Northwest. A garden dies beneath the weeds, as now, my tears, replace my sweat. I pray that it will be enough-- a sorrow's flood upon the soil, to overflow from salt-rimmed cup, and loose this clay, 'pon which, I toil. An agony of Autumn's greet-- a gaze upon a gray cloud sky... still, I welcome sweet reprieve, while plucking flowers that have died. The ground is wet with my regret. Next spring, I'll plant the best one yet. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
whoa little one...there's far more to this than the eye first sees... and I appreciate all of the innuendo that lies beneath the soil... very well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
serenity, this sonnet (I think its a sonnet) is so wonderful. So layered with meaning I can't fathom and may never.... You are such a poet for a Hedonist.... lol. Parker |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sonnet - schmonnet (no clue...LOL) The ground is wet with my regret. Cool! C |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Great..loved it..  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you Karilea, I appreciate your kindness as always... Parker--'tis indeed my attempt at Shakespearian sonnet, although the theme, I think is not to standard...but thank you, have been wondering where you've been...HUGS Thanks for popping in Chris! it's always a joy to hear from you...really, I mean that sincerely. No freaking sarcasm, okay? And thank you, Victoria, I am so relieved that your REPLIES are not disappearing!!! LOL and hugs, lady! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My dear friend I am back among the living and I am greeted with a beautiful verse(sonnet) from you. Tis wonderful and I DO BELIEVE that the next garden WILL be the best ever. With tears as sweet as yours how could it not be. Wonderful my friend. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahhh me sweet is "playing with poetry" again... and what a lovely sonnet this is ... wisdom kissed as well ... for no matter how hard we toil ... nature will undo all we've done .. but then offer renewal with the changing of the seasons. me thinks we need to hibernate with our muses for winter  then bloom as poetry poppies come spring. wonder what would happen if i watered me garden with raspberry tea  love this one me sweet sen you too me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sen'y Sen'y how does your garden grow.... I loved this!!!! **raising my hand** Oh teach me and I'll teach you graphics and colors Love ya girlie!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Spring will come again! It always does! Lovely poem, Serenity! Denise |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice Serenity Seems i should use this to do as you have asked me to so long ago. Well done Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mark, m'angelheart---thank you so much, and great big cowboy hugs to you... JM---RASPBERRY TEA? IN MY GARDEN? WOMAN--- HAVE YOU NEVER SEEN "LITTLE SHOP OF HORRORS?" (if ya haven't luv, we've still ANOTHER date...)Thank you much. All is, well....okay...lol. Holly--Big'un HUGS for you too. And teach you? YIKES!!! No, not me...but head on over to the "Poetry Workshop", I think a "Paradelle" is next on the list!!!!! (not quite sure what that is, but I aim to find out...lol..*wink*) dee--m'old friend...(didn't mean to imply you're old, either....serenity is typing carefully these days..LOL) I thank you SO much...you have been so lovely...I thank you. Rich--all you had to do was show up t'nite, to make my day? LOL...alright, so that didn't make sense, but why break a trend? Luv to you. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-11-2000).] |
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