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Your Smile!!!!!!!!!!
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Your Smile!!!!!!!!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Your smile so tender, When you looked Into my eyes, I get so lost, It caputure my heart, And soul, I can't take my eyes off from you, Your smile so tender , Your smile so pretty, like a rainbow, Has so many colours And shines my eyes away, You smile at me, When I touch you evertime, Your smile so warm and tender, Smile so tender, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ You write straight from your heart ... what a pleasure ! I love seeing your smiles here.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes a smile from someone special to us is precious...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
vandana, I'm sure that your smile is just as wonderful to the special person you talk about here. . . superb as always my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Vardana You captured this so well in your write. I liked this one very much. I believe any smile is good and doesn't have to come from a loved one or someone close to you. Just to be smiled at gives a person joy. Garfield |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice Vandana... I really like your poem. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very tender and filled with lovely sentiments! Denise |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you all!!!!!!!! |
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