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The Genie Of Time
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The Genie Of Time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Genie of Time Wishing, hoping are lamps with a prime All of us rub the genie of time. Given to us when first we are born Stays with us till our very last dawn. Our very last dawn, our very last morn Time will exist till then it is sworn. And non can say on the very last day They changed their minds and they want to stay. Your path of days flows only one time Life is the bell and you are the chime. Yours is the song and you sing it solo So if I were you I'd be Marco Polo. Some fade quickly some play the game Happy or sad, non are the same Then words are left a gift of the mind Markers to those who still stay behind. A marker may read, to all of the brave Use your genie, not as a slave. You've already won your beat on the drum Think of the multitudes never to come. Use it well with thought and with grace And clean it up for the next one in place. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sy...... This is marvelous!! I love the thought of leaving markers behind, that must fulfill every poet.....knowing that his words will still be here, even if he's not. Thank you for sharing this great poem!!  Follow your dream! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
All of us rub the genie of time. Given to us when first we are born Stays with us till our very last dawn. Our very last dawn, our very last morn Time will exist till then it is sworn. And non can say on the very last day They changed their minds and they want to stay. Your path of days flows only one time Life is the bell and you are the chime. ======================== Then words are left a gift of the mind Markers to those who still stay behind. A marker may read, to all of the brave Use your genie, not as a slave. You've already won your beat on the drum Think of the multitudes never to come. Use it well with thought and with grace And clean it up for the next one in place. ====================== OH MAN... this is SO SO FAR OUT FANTASTIC ... ABSOLUTELY POETIC AND PROPHETIC!! I see sweet SY-had his wisdom corn flakes for breakfast today  wow this poem is just so cool SY makes me smile so big... ya rang my bell blew my chimes beat my drums and primed my lamp with this wisdom kissed GEM and ya made YOUR mark MANY times with your poetic grace.. dont ever doubt that later-genie-in-a-bottle-gator jm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, Thank you so much for your kind words. For reading and liking the poem. *L* JM, Your comments always give me a warm glow. Your-genie-in-the-bottle-gator. *L* Sy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Your path of days flows only one time Life is the bell and you are the chime.' Well, I hope to ring loud and long ! How'd you get so wise anyway ?  Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful! I like the last 2 couplets. This is all so true, and an imaginative way of expressing it. Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a type that in essence will live forever. *L* Elizabeth, I can only say thank you and Love. Sy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've a favorite spot in my head...I keep you there to tweak my thoughts... you've a great imagination and I like to see it out and about... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, And I shall wear your favor when I mount my horse with lance. *L* |
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