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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan

0 posted 2000-10-08 12:44 PM


Though I've been prone
to frightful thoughts,
have borne some frightful
dreams.
None were quite as
terrifing
as when no one heard
my screams.

When I stood face to face
with anger incarnate.
Stood sober while threats
were incurred.
No vision at night,
exceeded the fright,
of that day
when my screams went unheard.

I shall never forget the feeling
of hearing the thin
bitter plea,
sent out from my heart
tearing me apart
as your hands caught hold of me.

It's not my fault,
and I know it.
Still, there are times
when I restlessly dream.
That I imagine it is,
and that answers the question,
Why is it?
No one heard my screams.


© Copyright 2000 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-10-08 01:14 AM


Oh my goodness Seraphin ... this is so powerfully written. If this is from personal experience, my heart goes out to you. Please know that if I'd been nearby ... I'd have come running. We actually intervened in something similar for a neighbour a while back, and went to court to testify as well. These are difficult times ... i hope you are now safe? Hugs to you,

Best wishes,
/Kit

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-10-08 08:06 AM


I am forwarding this to a friend if you don't mind.  I hear your screams and they are loud and clear.  EXCELLENT penning from your quill.  I am so glad that I found this one so I also leave a thanks as well with a huge hug.
Charisma
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lost in blue pages
3 posted 2000-10-08 09:38 AM


I hear you, and my heart goes out to you,
((Hugs))
Charisma

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-10-08 12:24 PM


we hear you and we respond, everyone is "screaming" through poetry and don't you forget it!

Kathleen


Sven
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5 posted 2000-10-08 01:39 PM


Superb my friend. . .

We do hear you. . .

This is excellent. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-10-08 02:00 PM


powerful, chilling, piercing, words ...
well expressed ...
when we write these things out we are given a voice to be heard...
and to help us heal.
I will wish and hope for both these things for you.
take care
jm

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
7 posted 2000-10-08 10:20 PM


thank you all, from my heart...Sandi
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