»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #10
»
The Words I Didn't Say
| Open Poetry #10 |
|
The Words I Didn't Say |
|
|
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
|
The Words I Didn’t Say How do I let you know it’s over? That I just can’t go on this way? My heart is hurting from the thoughts That form the words I couldn’t say My feelings for you haven’t changed I love you as much as yesterday I’m so afraid of hurting you It shows in the words I wouldn’t say It kills me to know you’re crying I don’t want to watch you walk away But there’s nothing more to talk about I said it all with the words I didn’t say |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Tara Simms - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"My heart is hurting from the thoughts That form the words I couldn’t say" Beautifully expressed Tara. It's so difficult to move on, when our hearts still hold a tender place ... sometimes words unsaid are the only way. Very nicely written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
||
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sometimes, it's hard to know what to say. . . either way, it's going to hurt. . . It's just hard to let go sometimes. . . Excellent my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
|
Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
It is so hard to leave someone you love dearly, especially if you know it will hurt them too. Great writing. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
||
|
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Tara.... This is elegant......it paints a goodbye setting, and shows the pain of parting. You think there's more to say, but no one does. Yes......very nicely put. Follow your dream! |
||
|
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tara, Stunningly beautiful writing! Much depth and heart went into this...that is apparent. Lovely! Take care. Amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
||
|
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thank you all for your comments. Sometimes it's difficult to let go sometimes we learn of things that make it easier to do. It still hurts either way you go. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
