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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2000-10-07 07:37 PM



I am a victim of my own making..
my reality temporally forsaken.
mind created..
heart waited..
words said..
passion fed..
bliss indeed..
only a need..
never lies..
tears cried..
only a friend..
till the end..
nothing more..
out the door..
no big deal..
love not real..
affair dealt..
Pain felt..
no regret..
I love yet..
I will be a victim until the end.
A real world love for lover and friend.


If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2000 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2000-10-07 07:55 PM


Oh WOW!!!   I love this, and the way it just cascaded down the page.
Excellent! Kitty  

Maree

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 10-07-2000).]

Kitty**
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
2 posted 2000-10-07 11:27 PM


Maree, thank you for reading this.
I'm glad you liked it. ;-)

Kitty

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-10-07 11:37 PM


Great writing Kitty! I enjoyed the fast pace and flow of the words ... wonderful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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