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Open Poetry #10

A Squirrel

Winnifer Fayre
Junior Member

since 2000-10-05

Posts 13

0 posted 2000-10-05 07:43 AM

I just took my hand to start writing poetry after a long absence. Here's my first stab at it:

A Squirrel

A squirrel, without worry,
scurries about the yard,
doing what things she must,
then hurries on home.

Fretful I tarry, late at my labors.
Grant me to grow a long furry tail!

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2000-10-05 10:35 AM

Now, this left me with a lasting impression.

We are a little like suirrels without the tails of course... A delightful first post.

Bob <><

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-10-05 02:27 PM

Winnifer, welcome to Passions! Check your e-mail for a special welcome!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

susanbartee
Member

since 2000-08-15

Posts 119
Channelview, TX USA

3 posted 2000-10-05 02:45 PM

Welcome to Passions. You will love it here. Good first post.

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

4 posted 2000-10-05 03:45 PM

Great first poem, You say you were having a break ? It dosen't show, you write as if you never stopped . I enjoyed it, Thanks .

L.of.L. Tom .

Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

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